The very last paragraph, I didn't fully understand. If you could explain that to me, I would be very happy.

Otherwise, I love this story. Teehee.

I can't say that I'm fanatic about smuts ... but I must say, smutty as this was, I actually enjoyed it ... ew, that sounded wrong.

Let me rephrase it in a less ... dodgy way. *coughs* Your fic is good. There. I said it! Yay! Nice job!

Interesting. -grins-
I rather do like the way you write Neji, Lee, and Tenten. Rather interesting. The ending line was just perfect too.

One criticism, though. At the beginning, you wrote:

This, however, was underhand and completely uncalled for.

I think you meant underhanded. (Sorry, I'm just nitpicky about grammar and spelling when I catch it.)

Very good fic.
~Jenni~

Awesome ^.^
new and interesting and well written /and/ smutty, what more can a girl ask for?
*^.^*