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Stoneage Woman
2009-05-19 . chapter 12
I loved this. Beautifully written, I can't wait to see where you're planning to take this.
crazybibliophile
2009-04-22 . chapter 12
wow. this is incredible. just wow. you write tony and rhodey so well, I have never come across one single other person who gets their characters as perfectly as you do. it's writers like you that make fan fiction worthwhile. :)
Kadigan
2008-12-27 . chapter 9
"I’d rather not have him trying to upgrade my computers while we’re in flight again."

Lines like this say so much with so little... I love it!
amonitrate
2008-12-25 . chapter 10
very enjoyable story. I like the dream with Yinsen: this bit felt very true.

“The world is the same as it has always been,” Yinsen said gently. “It is simply your view of it that has changed.”
DXRULES103
2008-10-15 . chapter 9
Amazing. I felt for Rhodey!
rebirthfry
2008-10-15 . chapter 9
Very thoughtful and interesting!
It could use some Pepper touch though!
Great Rhodey and Tony!
Lots of lost facts is fun!
Beboots
2008-10-14 . chapter 9
Thank you for updating!

Once again, I love seeing the way you've tied the gap in the scenes together - how we see the wheelchair, why Tony doesn't want to use it, etc.

I love the pilot, by the way - "If it helps any, I raided my son’s room before we flew over here. There’s a PSP, an iPod, and a beat up laptop loaded with God knows what that he can play with once we’re in the air." Aww... :3

Also, I love how Tony's first instinct is to take the things apart. XD

And the whole "I know you"/"Do you?" conversation... Very well done. :3

"If a member of the press had been there, Rhodey knew, Tony would have acted differently." Very true, I think. :3 And adorable!

I still love the little conversation Tony and Pepper have after his return. ;) Adorable as well! Yes, I know it's canon, but...

And now I'm really interested in seeing Rhodey's point of view reaction to Tony's press conference... I look forward to the next update! :D Rock on, and keep up the good work!
Robin Silverman
2008-09-22 . chapter 8
i'm liking this alot!
Beboots
2008-09-16 . chapter 8
I have got to say, this is one of the most in-character movieverse Iron Man fics that I've run accross. XD I love your Tony - you've really managed to deal with some of the trauma he must be experiencing realistically. I loved the little moment where he was automatically putting his hands on his head when he thought someone was coming through the door. Also, I loved reading quite a few of the lines between him and Rhodes - especially that one about how he made "the bigger stick", and the whole discussion with the robot cat and mouse. XD I can totally see Tony making those when bored... and drunk.

So please, update again soon! This fic is awesome! :D Rock on!
DXRULES103
2008-09-16 . chapter 8
Yeah an update! I love it so much. This story rocks.
Veldeia
2008-09-14 . chapter 8
My first review for this story - should've done one earlier, since I've been reading it all the time - lazy me :( I was so happy to see an update, because I really love this one. Such wonderful looks into both Tony and Rhodey's heads, and their friendship (relationship?) is so sweet. :) Things I particularly loved in this chapter: the whole scene where Tony's in the bathroom, how he thinks he doesn't know who he is anymore - I never even thought about that, but he sure must've felt that way. And favorite line: “Nope, flushed myself down the toilet. You better send out another search party.” Lol :D
the_85t-_writer
2008-09-14 . chapter 8
Jez, someone give Tony a hug,like NOW. This is the third Angsty!Tony fc I've read. He dies in one, almost commits suicide in another, and is all miserable in this. We need some serious Happy for the man. Oh Crap, just realised that could be taken another way Lol.
Elizabeth Bathory
2008-09-14 . chapter 8
this is a great fic and I look forward to updates - you like keeping us on the edge of our seats
Katie
2008-08-29 . chapter 7
I think this story is just great! I am so glad that you continued it. I think you have the dream sequences done well and the conversations and dialog are spot on.
deanandhisimpala
2008-08-14 . chapter 7
Another awesome chapter... very well done. As I said before I love how you write Tony and Rhodey... it's so right. Can't wait for more! Have to find out what Tony's looking for. :)
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