 MarbleGlove 8/19/09 . chapter 1Very nice. You've done a wonderful job of translating all of these characters into a completely different situation and yet stay true to them. I first read this some years back and somehow never got around to reviewing it. I'm glad to stumble across it again. I'm off to see what else you wrote and hoping for a sequel to this. |
 DragonLord WolfKnight Coker 9/9/08 . chapter 1Um, this is really dswdiane signed in on my son's account.
I really enjoyed this story. I totally agree with Tray, Elistaire, very nicely done and I would love a sequel. Thanks for a great read, though I agree that it would be good if you used a beta reader to catch the small grammar errors. |
 elistaire 3/5/05 . chapter 1 I've loved this story for quite a while now, and am always hoping that you'll be inspired to continue it on in a second story. This is such a fun premise, and an equally interesting meshing of the two worlds, that it is a shame to see it not continued. (*hint*) Although obviously immensely changed, the characters still contain their core elements, and they seem just at the beginning of their journey towards adulthood-a different adulthood than the one we are all familiar with. |
 Morrolan 4/26/02 . chapter 1Thats the end? Thats it? More please, this is really good, a sequel would be nice. |
 Remy Desire 4/25/02 . chapter 1I love this story. Will there be a sequel in the future? |
 Birgit 11/6/01 . chapter 1 I really love this story. Will there be another chapter ? Please, please, please ! |
 Mac 10/11/01 . chapter 1 Love the storyline. Can't wait to see how the next part turns out. You are writing another part to this right? |
 Valerie E. Mackin 10/11/01 . chapter 1I definitely like what you've done here. I spotted a few gramatical mistakes, but the storyline is great. |