this was interesting... o.o It started with an infatuated Kaiba and then BAM he's in the water.
fun :)

I like your portrayal of Seto. It's different, and intriguing. This was a little on the short side, but it does get everything across. I hope you put the next chapter up soon- this is supposed to be Seto/Shizuka, right? Let's see her entrance- I want to read how you portray her character.

This is how I can describe your fic: Simple, and too the point, and somewhat on the sweeter side of things. It's interesting that Kaiba has reasons to doubt on his motives, and that sort of opens up new dimensions to him. Overall, I am encouraged to see where you intend to take this story.
Cheers.

-I.P. (Yamiko)

This is interesting.

TDH