Aw that was such an adorable story! Can't believe I haven't read this one, there should be more Charladay stories out there cause they are pretty cute together. Both were totally in character too, awesome job for your first :)

Great job! I think that you do these two very well...I love the interactions between them, there is such a love between them that I hope the writers fix in the future. :)

So cute! Dan was totally in character. I love the way you write his quirkiness. Very nice! I was actually rubbing my hands together trying to feel the friction. Love it! Please write more Dan/Charlotte fics. This website needs more and you would be very good at writing them. Please consider it!

this is really good, they are both totaly in character!

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Oh! That was so sweet! I think Dan was perfectly in character. Aww, I loved this :D Great job!

Great job. Hope to see more of your work!

Not bad at all! I'm a (relatively new) Lost fan myself, and I rather like Dan's character. I think you pulled him of exellently in this story.

I LOVED it! Loved it. Love Dan/Charlotte.

aw... i like this story. They are so cute.

That was a cute one-shot! Love it!

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Charladay is the bestiest pairing evar!

Awesome story, btw!