wow, that really got shivers going down my spine. Great fic you've got going on here. One more chapter? I'm anxious to read it!

(Btw, loved Kanda's nightmare. You really did justice to his personality.)

Very, very good angst. I can feel thier pain and emotions from your writing, it comes alive in my head. i'm definitely faving this story! Great writing^^

I liked! Keep it up! Who's the next chapter?

Gasp! Your wrote NoisexMiranda! I love you so much right now ^^

Keep up the great work I'm really enjoying this story, I'm really interested to see who you do next ^.^

Toodles

xD So it was Marie.. Right.. I kept thinking it was Krory.. -_- Cause I kept thinking they fit so well together (both panicking like mad.. xD)

i think you really captured miranda well in this chapter, the sream was slightly scary, but i did like it. im just twisted like that >=D. anyway i like how you threw in a little miranda/noise thing. i think they're cute together ^.^~ cant wait for the next chapter

I liked it! Though it was kinda strange to read taht she was sewing flesh together and eyes back onto someone's head...but it was still wonderfully written and it didnt seem that disturbing. Did that even make sense? Hah, I hope so...my mind doesn't seem to want to cooperate with me right now...or is it my body doesn't want to cooperate with my mind? o.o? Ah, well. Great chapter, so sad taht this story's gonna be over so soon. Still, wonderful job, and can't wait for your next one! XD

wow, you did this chapter really well. i think you really got lenalees character well. i cant wait to read the next chapter!

Erm.. Don't kill me if I say this.. But then I think that koi is Japanese.. If I'm not wrong, carp should be the correct word to put in there, right?

Yay! Internet fixed and I'm here to cheer you on and tell you that your awesomeness is simply awesome! You are really good portraiting Komui, you know o.o... wow. Just wow. I can't wait to see how you Lenalee (maybe with Lena and lee?)

Well, it´s late now, so bye. You just got about 9 cookies!

With love,
Lu!

lavi and koumi are two of my favorite characters too! so sad this chapter, but well done! i like it! ^.~

You did an excellent job portraying Komui. I love how you grasped his character so well. The emotion was so human and beautiful. Komui deserves more things written about him like this. =3

XD This is really great!
I love your writing style =D

lol so komui sad how the black order is so cruel

You know what, this is the best writing 'bout Lavi's life I've ever read. And yes, I mean it. I've read a lot of your stories, I like them all, but I love this chapter the most. It was so great, that I've lost in words. There's no words in this world could express my love for Lavi. And I understand why you could write such an awesome chapter like this, with your love and feelings. That impresses me a lot!
I love it, really!