Reviews for Bedtime Tale
Blaze808 4/1/10 . chapter 1
Was that Bobby as the boy, and Saint Dane the babysitter? That was really good! If I was right about the characters, they were like themselves!
Chaseha-Wing 9/21/09 . chapter 1
Nice job, I wonder who those two were?
sweats4life 5/18/09 . chapter 1
The babysitter is Saint Dane. Thats why he/she has blue eyes. The little boy is Bobby. Thats why he forgets the story.
Aradhel Rien Atrail 4/4/09 . chapter 1
Nice story, is the babysitter Saint Dain? And is the boy Pendragon? Or am I just delusional?
Paegodude 1/20/09 . chapter 1
aw, courtney took up babysitting and told the boy about the travlers.

that's so cute.

i wonder how the story will end. i hope the travelers win. i really really do.
lalaland 12/8/08 . chapter 1
Really good story! I love it!
Dreamsong 10/11/08 . chapter 1
Interesting. But I have to wonder who the babysitter was. Maybe I just didn't catch it. Oh well. Nice.

Dreamsong
aceflygirl 8/23/08 . chapter 1
wow. that was pretty sweet. so was the baby sitter saint dane and the kid bobby? thats what i thought it was when i was reading it. at first i thought it was courtney but...BLUE eyes? but yeah your writing is pretty great.
Aero-Dragon's-Sky 7/3/08 . chapter 1
Aw, cute little kid. It sounds like the baby sitter was Saint Dane with the whole blue eyes thing. Great job!
D0nQuix0te 6/14/08 . chapter 1
That was sweet. :) I enjoyed it!

Did you imagine the babysitter as any specific character? She kind of reminded me of Courtney, I suppose.

Nice story! Well written!

-D0nQuix0te