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| Miss Late Bloomer 2008-06-15 ch 2,  | abuseEven though they're being jerks, I love them together. There's just this electric quality to the pair, and you see glimpses of it on the show. (They're amazing chemistry, although the show's careful to keep it buddy/buddy.) You capture that quality as well, and I'm glad you decided to do Josef's POV. No snark, but don't worry. This worked just fine, I promise. |
| kschwaab 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseHOT, HOT, HOT! |
| scrappyearnhardt 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuse:) |
| clairlz 2008-06-14 ch 2, | abuseVery Hot. Very good. |
| scrappyearnhardt 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuse:) |
| .SoDa.PoP9. 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseomg that was awsome, i do hope you make a whole story will lots of chapis becuase the last few rocked and i would love to see more |
| Miss Late Bloomer 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, I want to say this is very good. It's all sexy in a totally forbidden way. This continues to be in character for both Beth and Josef. Now, if I were to advise Mick: Dump Beth, let her be with Josef, and after healing up, go find Coraline. It'll be crazy and dangerous but at least faithfulness was never their problem. I'll never understand these men that make idiots of themselves for Beth Turner. Thumbs up. |
| kschwaab 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abusegreat story! |
| Vampire Reader 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseHey, I'm first. Very sexy. Right there in the lobby? My goodness. Of course Mick will know. Will it bother Beth if he does? Will the boys kill each other? If she actually prefers Josef to Mick, Mick would back off, but it would tear him apart. You write well. |