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| Casa Circe 2008-06-20 ch 1,  | abuseI love this, I really do. I had hoped that someone would do a piece on Caspian and Susan after the whole White Witch summoning fiasco. And this was absolutely satisfying. You were able to capture them both in character, explore the nuances of the White Witch's effect on Caspian, and bring forth the humanity of the Kings and Queens. This was a very admirable piece and an enjoyable read as well. |
| mistressbabette51 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThe tension was definitely there. Excellent connection between them, and Susan’s understanding of the situation was a welcome surprise. Caspian was surprised too! I liked it! Thanks. |
| MeggieandFarid4evr 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseaw so sad, but I suppose she did have to leave. |
| QueenSusanLovesKingCaspian1... 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseoh wow |
| liz22463 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseaww!! that was so sweet! poor caspian! i think you should continue it! |
| Rishtalak 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this, especially how you made the two of them rather confused in regards to their reactions to eachother. You can't expect people their age to be too confident, but too many authors forget that. Well done. |
| Politics.and.Prose 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was excellent. I truly enjoyed it. |
| gah 2008-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG. I love this fic. I love how u didn't make them kiss just yet, it just makes the wait all the more delicious. :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I love you! |
| Shining Friendship 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseWow! Amazing one-shot! I wish you could've continued this fan fic though 'cuz it had an awesome start if you wanted write it into a story. Could you do a sequel to it maybe? |
| Senini 2008-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was very nice; thank you. |
| sweet 2008-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was simply beautiful. You are a talented writer. The peice was simple, elegent, and absolutly wonderful. |
| sparkling-stone 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseThey are SO CUTE TOGETHER! This is amazing, and I had a smile on my face the whole time during the fluffy bits. Thanks so much. |
| mary-v 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseOk so I want to stay cool and collected, and try to give you a coherent review, but hell, all I want to do is *squee* (and add about a million e's there) and simultaneously bash their heads together so they can get to the Lovin'. hehe Awesome, darling!:D I love it!:DD |