I love Susan so much!

Hahaha Caspian's in love! lol That was really sweet. I especially liked how you were able to have Caspian decide for himself just how Susan was Queen Susan the Gentle. Nice job!

I love this, I really do. I had hoped that someone would do a piece on Caspian and Susan after the whole White Witch summoning fiasco. And this was absolutely satisfying. You were able to capture them both in character, explore the nuances of the White Witch's effect on Caspian, and bring forth the humanity of the Kings and Queens. This was a very admirable piece and an enjoyable read as well.

The tension was definitely there. Excellent connection between them, and Susan’s understanding of the situation was a welcome surprise. Caspian was surprised too! I liked it!

Thanks.

aw so sad, but I suppose she did have to leave.

oh wow

aww!! that was so sweet! poor caspian! i think you should continue it!

I really liked this, especially how you made the two of them rather confused in regards to their reactions to eachother. You can't expect people their age to be too confident, but too many authors forget that. Well done.

That was excellent. I truly enjoyed it.

OMG. I love this fic. I love how u didn't make them kiss just yet, it just makes the wait all the more delicious. :D UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I love you!

Wow! Amazing one-shot! I wish you could've continued this fan fic though 'cuz it had an awesome start if you wanted write it into a story. Could you do a sequel to it maybe?

That was very nice; thank you.

that was simply beautiful. You are a talented writer. The peice was simple, elegent, and absolutly wonderful.

They are SO CUTE TOGETHER! This is amazing, and I had a smile on my face the whole time during the fluffy bits. Thanks so much.

Ok so I want to stay cool and collected, and try to give you a coherent review, but hell, all I want to do is *squee* (and add about a million e's there) and simultaneously bash their heads together so they can get to the Lovin'. hehe

Awesome, darling!:D I love it!:DD