Holy Mother, that was absolutely captivating. I have goosebumps all over my body and the hair on my arms are standing straight up. What a wonderful story. Please write more or please write another story only longer this time.
Truly, I was moved!

Wonderful little story! I'm very impressed!

Aw. I was crying when it got to the part where Trumpkin saw Mr. Tumnus's grave. It's really sad that the Pevensie's left without them having the chance to say goodbye to their friends and the fact that Lucy never got to see Mr. Tumnus again! Anyway, I love how you wrote this fic. Loved it!

Oh I love this! What a great idea. Really sad, but so nice as well. Really nice, thanks for this :)

I smiled the whole way through while I read this because it is so beautiful.

Far out - thats the most i've cried whilst reading a fanfiction in a long while! That was totally awesome - i loved every bit of it.

aw!! it was so sad! my throat's still all clogged up and tight. it was really bitter sweet, and i loved that tumnus was burried next to the lantern where he'd first met lucy.

oh no! i'm crying again.

i LOVED it; great work. :) seriously - i cant even say how much i loved it.

Love bundi

What a brilliant idea, to connect two of Lucy's dearest Narnian friends. Your description of the emotion felt by the Narnians after the disappearance of the Four, in the second and third paragraphs, is splendid. It makes the Pevensies' stay in Narnia a blessing, not a blight--as it should be. It was great that you had Tumnus encounter Aslan, too. I could never believe that Aslan would just let the kids disappear without any word to either them or the Narnians they left behind. Later on, I love that you have Trumpkin express jealousy of the Narnians who got to see Lucy on Dawn Treader. The way you end the story, with Trumpkin's discovery and then the last two lines so full of hope, is awesome. Very lovely all through.

I like it very much. It's true to the emotions in the books, although some of the time references in your story tripped me up a bit.

But they love their friend, and will miss her until at last they meet again. That is what's important, and you relay that very well. Good job.

They Will Meet Again. Oh so true. Thanks for posting.
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