Whoa this sucks! Poor Harry =[

Whoa this is good! you might want to change the horribly graphic way you describe Lily's state of death...I felt like I wanted to throw up too! Ah well. Eight out of ten!

Audrey33

interesting, wonders what will happen next, byes

Oi oi you should really rethink your decision about posting this story...is written in a strange and poor style, and you even got names wrong...