wo THREESOME xDD *im so imature* lol

lol my first chappi and im already screaming WO A THREESOME *im a naughty yaoi fangirl xDD*

Heehee, I really like your stories. ^_^

awesome me so glade that you updated it. me can't wait for the next chapter

chocolate is poisonous for dogs. That might be something to clean up.

Honestly, this looks more like an outline than a story. If you don't have time or inspiration to fill out the plot, add dialogue, discriptions, take this and send it to another inucest author that takes requests so that they can write out hte idea to it's fullest potential. Because it does have potential.

it really good... never heard of his forest being bonded and can talk to him, i like it... plz update!

This is a good story! I hope you continue it.

love your story its really good :) please upload the next chapter soon can't wait to know whats wrong with sesshy. The whole forest bonding with inuyasha thing was really creative you're the only person to do that in any inuyasha fanfic. i've read so far. Congratulations on creating such a wonderfull story you might want to use a bit more describing words and interesting words that arent used frequently (it gives the story a bit of color...idk if u understand wat im trying 2 say :P lol)
~DianaM :)

Let it be known that this is constructive criticism and not a flame.

You have a very good idea going here. I have never tried to read a tri-pairing with these three but you make it work. Being able to make something skeptical work is one of the makings of a good fanfic writer.

My biggest issue with this story is that everything seems to be it's own individual idea. While that is okay for outlines it's not so much for stories, stories need to have a consistent flow to make it readable and enjoyable.

My advice is to get a beta reader. Beta readers can be very useful in finding plot holes, grammar issues and generally just to bounce ideas with.

Keep working towards your goal and you will get there!

Oh noes! Sessho's sick. I'm looking forward to your next chap.

I had to laugh when thinking of them fearful outside the hut before going into face Sanga's wrath. They're mates hooray lol just had to say it.

ouch! Kilala to the rescue this time. lol at Sanga the mother hen.

tear! Sessho & Kouga to the rescue! Glad Inuyasha is away from that sicko. nice chap.

What happened? I like this story so far. Thanks for the story. Hope there is another chapter out soon. Keep up the great work.