your summary sucked me in and i had to keep reading, even though i didn't want to, to the horrible end. not that your writing is ever horrible. just the subject of your writing. depressing.

and naruto's last words (or really, postmortem words, i guess..?) "I'm just a little sad. I mean, I though we were friends..." tugged at my heart. more like trampled it, actually, but. well.

thanks for sharing.

I agree with the rest. This is fic is well written. Wow.. that was really ... gosh can't find a word to describe it. =) Glad I stumbled across your fic. Good job!

Oh this was such a sad short story.

You have amazing talent as a writer. This was short, but not in a bad way. You provided sufficient details and didn't breeze through it. Also, at the beginning, the police record thing was really good: by including things like (see Uchiha Itachi) and (see autopsy report pg 3) in the text, you made it seem as if you were really a policeman and had seen or made these records many times. I mean, you might've, I don't know, but if you didn't, you fooled me. Very nice work! ^_^

...I like to think it was Itachi, not Sasuke. I mean, from far away.. with those lines under his eyes covered by those SUNGLASSES you mentioned... Itachi COULD look like Sasuke! Right?

*is hopeful*

*crickets chirp*

Anyway - real good. Just... depressing...

Oh my god that's so sad!
So tragic but beautifully written!

To be an 18 year old boy, and only 5'5... that must suck. Add to that that you're dead and well... poor ol' Naruto.

A really well written fic. The description was incredibly well done, all vivid and whatnot, and the actual story was really cool as well.

Depressing, but cool.

The first person narrative works really really well, as well.

I did not understnad your story. Why did it end like that?

(embarrassed laugh)..Erm..¬¬" I dont get it much..Did Naruto get attacked but Sasuke didnt even help him..=/

Well, short and to the point, I'd say. It was good. I'm curious as to why Sasuke wouldn't help him, but I suppose I've got an imagination for that.

The opening paragraph was really what sucked me in. It made the whole (short) fanfiction seem like a mystery that was unraveling.

Nicely done.

Oh, and props to your for the good grammar/spelling. Awesome.

Jesus Christ. You pack a powerful punch.

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That was amazingly depressing.
But really, really good.
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Must go read fluff now, or I'll never get to sleep tonight. :D

Please make a sequel to this so Sasuke can get his, the little bastard was there, let and watched Naruto be murdered, and lied about it,he probablay bought those five people off to keep them quiet about him not being at their house.