I like it! It's a little... well, I honestly, really, really don't mean any offense, but the way it's written is a little... well... um, childish...
But I still like it! I've recently gotten into Ed/Em, and it's my favorite pairing besides Ed/Bella. =)

I hope you update soon!

AH!
God has destroyed common sense!
-hyperventilating in fetal osition sucking thumb-

um. wow. thats uh... something. lol kinda funny but a little creepy...

i really like this story i really want you to contiued this. its really funny and amazing. i think what should happen is that emmett falls in love with edward. and one question, how can you recover your password cause i forgot mine! HELP!

I don't like yuri.. I said yaoi... but good job on the 4th chapter...

umm... its intersting i have tons of gay friends so nothing against them its just edward and emmett are NOT gay!

more!

This is a...interesting story. :-)

WTF,is up with that I mean, is EDWARD the most gorgeous, romantic, caringf, sweet, sexy man everthought up GAY!you better hope I don't find out where you live!

please update soon!

No way is he gay too?

i think emmet should say that he is gay too or that he likes boys & girls (i forgot the word)

it's a good story but...WHY DID YOU MAKE EDWARD GAY!(story is still good.:) )

XD I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING AT THIS!! IT'S FUNNY! XD It reminds me of the time me and Kelly skipped through school with out arms around each other's waists to scare people XD

GOOD JOB, SABOR!! (three thumbs up) ..I should have a doctor see this. o.o; Anyways, I can't wait until the 3rd chapter!! My favourite part was when Story Edward popped up and the real Edward was like, "HOW THE HECK DID YOU GET HERE?!" XD (cough)I should shut up now

YAY! You wrote this for me, didn't you? ^_^ I loved every second of this story! And I know how Edward and Bella feel... I have gay friends who like me, but don't love them in that way, so yeah. Awesome job, Sabor!