this is really good - yes I'm finally reading it - and have been reading the later versions/current version of TT so I know the Beta characters to a point

favorite line -

"Dick I'm a witch not a miracle worker." she said.

DeForest Kelley smiles down at you from Heaaven

Great job - LJ

Hey buddy, just wanted to review while I had temporary access to a computer...anyways...Awesome ending to an awesome story. Though Tarantula coming out of nowhere to shoot Blockbuster kind of took a little away from Nightwing's victory and we don't know what happened to Tarantula after that... Also you didn't say anything about what happened to Star after that battle. However I have no complaints about the fight against Doomsday. Pure awesomeness.

Yay! Conner lived! Best line: Blockbuster's first villainous speech about how Nightwing can never defeat him. Worst line: "You want thunder? Bring the noise!" "Oh, I'll bring it all right!" Not cool man.
Very good final chapter. The end was really good and happy-ending-ish, while also being the being of something slightly new. Nice job on the fic in general.

What can I say? That was epic. That was beyond epic. This is the best Teen Titans story ever!

I really loved the fight between Doomsday and Superboy; that's the stuff legends are made out of. And glad to see that Blockbuster got what was coming to him. ^_^ What exactly does Nightwing's armor look like?

This was a really great story, dude. I hope the sequel is just as good, if not better.

Keep up the good work, and TITANS TOGETHER!

-CJ

P.S. Have you heard about the "Deathtrap" story with the Teen Titans and Vigilante?

Though I like to think Ulysses trained for his muscles I think I read the General used steroids I like think maybe even a venom variation, maybe in some juvie scared straight program he was taken to meet adult criminals and met Bane and David Cain who taught him his martial arts though his inexperience puts him at a disadvantage from the likes of Tim Drake who are seasoned against other great warriors but still incredibly formidable and his genius makes him Tim Drake's Joker

A serum like Deathstroke or more likely himself though different is way better

I'm glad Cassandra Cain wasn't here to hear the Spoiler say what she did about accepting destiny
from DNA

That was cool Blockbuster telling Grayson he was a worthy opponent before he died though I'm a little dissappointed he didn't give any Nietzsche wannabe speech about the weak exist to serve the strong or deep down everyone is just as bad as him or worse

Really hope Doomsday regenerates eventually he always comes back I love villains who do that

I understand Dick has wife and kid and a life who he must be responsible for and surly he doesn't have to anything none of the heroes actually have to do anything but it just seemed like with Black Mask he said it's not his problem which made him seem like a jerk but like I said a wife and kid and that is what a real man does is there for them

liked the Cassie and Conner stuff

Hope to see real ubermench for the greater good villains next time

This rocked More in the sequel soon please

Wow that was a super intense battle, both of them. I thought for sure Conner was going to die, I'm so glad he didn't. I like the Cassie/Conner stuff there.

It seemed like nothing would destroy Doomsday, but I like the idea that you came up with, I think it works.

I thought something was going to happen to Nightwing or Starfire, but I'm glad that they were able to take down Blockbuster too.

Good ending to the story.

As for the Inertia thing, my suggestion is a one-shot.

Anyways, great job.

Well, I for one am happy for your mercy in the context of chapter length, but I am seriously looking forward to the conclusion of this story. Sorry for not reading sooner, and I'm wondering what's going to become of Inertia in the aftermath of this battle. Plus, Nightwing vs. Blockbuster . . . and hopefully it ends better than in canon. Will Rose be a permanent member of the Titans in the end, too? God, I hope so. Heh. Thanks for another thrilling chapter.

One of the more enjoyable chapters lately, that's for sure. The Doomsday battle was kinda hum-de-dum (What? What does that even mean? I mean semi-boring.) before, but this chapter it was my favorite part. The Nightwing vs. Torque fight was pretty cool too. The Speed Clones were a nice touch as well. Update soon!

Holy crap! I'm finally leaving that review I said I would give you, what? Two weeks ago now? Sorry I'm such a slow ass.
Any way. I rather enjoy your versions of Bart and Thad. Bart was very nice with his absent minded hilarity, and poor Thad losing a Sun Girl. I, like Inertia, was hoping Cluemaster would put up more of a fight, but then it's kinda hard for most humans to fight back when they have a gaping hole in your chest. What with the massive blood loss and the inability to breath with out lungs, the possibility of no longer having a functioning heart and all that rot. So I guess I can't really hold it against him. Ha! Fun fun little ability you have there Inertia.

Any-who! Very nice. I shall review your next chapter...eventually...when it's not all one-o-clock in the morning and what not.

Very well done as always. that torque guy was freaky hard too and of course so is doomsday. I thought Kid Devil had him but boy was I wrong.

Good chapter.

I really like how you had Inertia come in, I think that was my favorite part. I was worried about him for a while, if he was hurt to much or something.

That's really frustrating with Doomsday, I can't wait until they take him out. But I do like that you didn't have him go down easy, that wouldn't make sense at all.

Great job on this.

That was pretty cool and you're right to give the battle between Dick and Blockbuster it's deserved time in the spotlight

Getting the other villains to come to the good guys' aid I like it normally if it is a villain and good guy team up I want it to be against big threat that's bad for everyone you made it work I don't normally like it I do like the idea but how they do the enemy mine thing sometimes makes me mad

Tell me Slade and Grant were just bailing on Blockbuster

Cool Doomsday healing factor remember he can't be "killed" the same way twice and always comes back

Wow! Just when I thought the action couldn't get any better...

I mean, Kid Devil literally melted Doomsday! Holy crap! But then again, it takes a lot to kill a dude like that...

I'm still uneasy that Nightwing killed Torque. Bad guy he may be, but heroes don't kill. Unless you're Wolverine. XD

I can't wait for the next chapter! And I'm really sure that the sequel will be even better! Take care,

-CJ

P.S. I'm gonna start a Titans story soon, so expect a lot of PM'S. I might need your help.

You wanna know my favorite part? Inertia finishing Cluemaster. Why? Because the motivation is somewhat like the Inertia I remember from the Impulse comics, a right bastard, but not a completely heartless sociopathic killer. Shame Sun Girl died, though, and that lightning aura surrounding Inertia almost reminded me of Dragon Ball Z when Goku or Gohan gets really pissed off and goes Super Saiyan. I also liked the confrontation between Kid Devil, Kid Crusader, and Rose, as well as Impulse thrashing Doomsday. Looking forward to the final chapter.

Don't worry, I think this was a great chapter. I think you should wrap it up with the next chapter or two, then start the sequel. A possible storyline could involve the Fearsome Five or the Brotherhood of Evil. And PM me if you need more members for the team.

So were Sun Girl and Inertia dating or what? The dude was pretty P.O'ed! And I think that was a really selfless thing for Eddie to do. That's the kind of stuff a hero is made out of.

Great job with this story!

-CJ