Ugh.. Made me think about my own life. No incest though. I shed a tear.

You're really good.

Wow. That was absolutely amazing. Is it too late to ask for another chapter?

Omg i love this story. It is so awesome. I dont care if they are related i still love it. :)You did AWESOME!

That's great. Absolutely brilliant. Gaatem is so rarely protrayed with skill equal to yours.

awesome! i didnt get to read the whole thing yet, but i will later. love it so far!

... Amazing

Wow, very descriptive.
So adding this to my favs!

All I can say is, you have alot of talent,I was really pulled into the story and understood every word of it. Good job, really.

I had a strange feeling this was how it was going to end. Intruging actually. I really liked it. I'd see a new chapter, though I completely understand if you do not wish to continue...

I loved it!! Just perfect!! The way you wrote this is just perfect. You catch the personalities just too perfect!!
I admire you, this one goes to favorites.
It's a pleasure to read this story!!

This is a VERY good story. I really love the concept of it a lot. It's sad that it has to end like this...

I agree with your other reviewers...a sequel would be awesome...to see what happens after all this and to see reactions to everything from everyone...hm

Sequel please! ^_^

I'm curious to know how Gaara's wife, Temari, and Gaara all live their lives after this; and how they are all effected by one another--not to mention their thoughts/feelings. You've gotta update--because to not update is cruel. ^_^ Not to mention that kid's reaction to the twisted situation she's/he's probably put through.

this story is BEYOND amazing. i love them older and i love their interactions throughout the fic. in this story i see an aged and more mature version of the gaara from PBU. temari seems very fragile but it's understandable with him marrying another woman.

i think a sequel would be phenomenal given this precarious scenario. it's precarious b/c ppl are ppl and jealousy is BOUND to arise out of such a set-up. i don't care WHAT woman u are. having a husband as smooth and delicious as gaara...eventually u will want some type of affection from him.

and as for temari. the emotions that will surface when his wife becomes pregnant would be very interesting to read. why? b/c despite knowing that it means nothing, there would be very real and visible evidence that gaara and spouse had sex. not only that, the issue of a child is a delicate matter. to know u could never give the person u love that one gift as a woman is usually heart-breaking. but then to see someone else stand in where u have "failed" would be the twist in the back by a very sharp knife. i think it would start to eat away at temari/gaara's relationship and THAT would be the heart of an obviously epic fic.

*crosses fingers for sequel*

O.O how did i miss this?
omg, i know this's very demanding of me but if you're nice, you have to give us a continuation. I freakin LOVE your version of Kazekage Gaara! He's got some extremely sexy personality and more!! not that he wasn't sexy before but the kazekage is my favorite gaara...so...please excuse me while i go.. *nosebleeds*

ok, on a serious note...I had never thought about Gaara getting married in a Gaara/Temari fic. So that one part upset me the most, not the story, but I could almost feel what Temari would if I were in her shoes. I don't know how but the moment I read that, a tear just started rolling down. I wished the story is longer so I can read more, it's beautiful...