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Bee Bop 9/24/05 . chapter 1
I was crying when i read that.. its so sad. i love it.
anonymous victim 10/25/04 . chapter 1
you were so close! you were so so very close to writing something brilliant! what happened, dude? why did you do something that was so completely off? why?
Moi 9/9/04 . chapter 1
Lovly my favorite line was

" He was at the back of his mind, at the front of his thoughts, at the center of each waking moment."

Brilliant.
able pudding 8/4/04 . chapter 1
wow...that was so deep and well written. it almost made me cry which is saying alot! FF.net needs more quality fics like this. THANK YOU!(glomps amethyst soul)
Kuroi Inanis 3/16/04 . chapter 1
Flame, flame! I flame you! Nah, I kid :P It was an awesome story! Awesome, but very sad.. can we by chance hope for a sequel? :P
Deuil 1/9/04 . chapter 1
O_O Holy crap. That was amazing. You are an amazing writer. just...wow. That's all I can say XD;;
Idgiebay 9/30/02 . chapter 1
I... I never reviewed this fic? What the hell is wrong with me? I read it when you first posted it and I could have sworn that I left a review, but I guess not.. anyhow.. The last time FFN was down, I re-read this at Tif's website and fell in love with it all over again. You really have a knack for imagery, you know-I've told you quite a few times before, I think, but I'll tell you again: whenever I read a story of yours, I can flawlessly picture everything inside my head. The way your sentences flow together is great, too... I never stop and say, "Gee.. this doesn't really sound right.. hrm," like I do with most fics.

Did I mention that this made me cry the last time I read it? Well, it did. I love fics that can make me cry. Okay, enough praise! *dies*
Zarla 5/19/02 . chapter 1
So sad. But this is really good tho. But so sad. _o
Abducted Dib 3/4/02 . chapter 1
After I read one of your fanfics I had to read another, and this one is so sad... there should be a sequel to it though... ;.; Very good job at captering emotions... Wow... I love your work, I wish I were a fraction as good as you are at writing.
OpalescentTear 2/11/02 . chapter 1
o.O eep! I didn't notice that I hadn't reviewed this yet! I LOVE this story, and the song you picked fits perfectly with it. Write more stories along this line, you're great at it!
anime z0mbie 12/14/01 . chapter 1
This story was incredibly beautiful. I even downloaded the song "trouble" and listened to it while I was reading, and it really adds to the feel of the story. It makes me wonder if Zim would reply to any of the letters though, but anyways... great job!
Pepperleen 12/11/01 . chapter 1
This is an absolutely beautiful story. Many people write on the "Zim and Dib get together and don't find acceptance" theme, but I feel like you brought something fresh and new to it. The conversation at the beginning was just heartbreaking. I would love to see a sequel to this, simply because I find your writing to be wonderful. Dib seems so...empty...the way you described this really touched me. Great fic.
Omega3 12/2/01 . chapter 1
Eej, I can just never get what your saying. Awesome description, though. Very depressing. Need...spaztiscity...
Dreya -lady drea 11/24/01 . chapter 1
*blinks* o.o...::awed silence:: you ever think of becoming professional? I can't even believe you read my IZ fic and reviewed! It's like...like royalty going slumming in the backstreets of town...-_-;;
Jibaku-chan 11/15/01 . chapter 1
Aww, jeeze...you made me cry...this is so good! poor everyone, tho...I feel so damned ad for Dib. I like the idea of the letters. And yeah, I've finally got everything settled and Im back forthe long run. _ You keep kicking so much ass and youll start making the restof us look silly-so keep it up! _
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