This was hot. Really. I'm sorry, I cant think of anything else to say. Wow. Hot. And angsty...gosh I love it!

Looking back, I think I like the second chapter the best, but the whole thing was so ...T/P that I jsut love the whole thing.

I'm sorry, I suck at reviewing. Just...hot. And sweet.

Wow. The way this went from scorchingly hot to heart achingly tender was great. And then to finish it off with the great Pepper/Tony banter... brilliant. Love it!

i really liked this story. you got into the heart of the characters i think, anyways good job and this is now a favorite

This was a terrific piece. The dynamic between Pepper (wants Tony but won't admit it to herself) and Tony (always gets what he wants, because he's a sexy jackass) is perfect.

Stayed up all night looking for good Iron Man fic. This was the best one I read.

Oh, point match, Pepper. Lovely.

Uh oh. That little...giggle might get him in trouble!

I don't know...all that, top position and all, it just seems like too much responsibility for my liking. Too much pressure.

By the way, it is too damn hot out for all this!

That's right kids,love not war! A more than simple way of thinking. Thought I myself have never tried it out :)

Again, you guys flow together so nicely!!

Well, if that isn't the way to kicks things off :D
Nice pairing you two/

OMG...just...guh. Angst and hot and tenderness and snark and vulnerability and healing... *shakes head* You two are just frikkin' amazing!

And Tony & Pepper are SO going to sleep for 24 hours straight back at the house! (After they get a few things... ahem!...out of the way first!)

Gracious that was hot. Well done. There was even enough angst in there to suit me. You two keep up the great work and I look forward to the next collaboration.

I really liked what you both did with this story. I only recently started reading Iron Man stories and I really enjoyed this one. I can't wait to see what you both come up with next.

great ending!

You guys did a phenomenal job on this piece!

Can't wait to see what ya'll put together next :~)

Cheers
AJ

this fanfic rocks! thats all there is to say!
-liz

Aw
I loved this. The ending line was brilliant.
Giant smile shall grace my face for the whole day.
Thanks