Oh, I love this! Thank you so much for sharing it.

Like one of your other reviewers, I too wish this was a bit longer, although in stopping where you did, you've kept your depiction of Barb right in character.

I like the reference to Barb's upbringing, and her thought about what she's supposed to think.

Aw. I love Barb and Margie together, and there's not nearly enough fic for them :) (In fact, I don't think I've ever read any other Barb/Margie fic.) This is very sweet.

BTW, it's spelled Nicki, not Nikki :)

This story was so sweet and just so "aw". It actually even made me smile. I loved the last line, it was, well, beautiful. Great job.

I wish that you had continued it and made it longer. I was a really good beginning but I feel like there was more to tell. Anyway, I love Big Love and this was an excellent piece!