thnk u TwT im srry if i keep asking the same questin but i love this story and i have to see more kurofai!

Love it. Keep writing.

Butt chin XD Whew, you got quite a laugh out of me with that chapter. It was absolutely fab, lol! Kurogane in a sailor suit? Subaru dressed as a woman? Sakura as a boy (not as surprising, but still...). And, the password business? It's just brilliant!
But...the 'butt chin' bit had to be the funniest thing ever. The way you described it was, hahahah!

And...Loompie woompie? Where on earth did you come up with that? It almost sounds like something from "Willy wonka and the chocolate factory", you know those orange skinned, green haired dudes? XD

The ending didn't turn out very funny, though. I really hope things start turning in for their favor. And I do hope Sakura doesn't get into anymore trouble as she did when she was tugged into the house.

I look forward to more!! ^__^

Yay! They're on their way to find Fai-chan now! *happy dance* The conversation about FWR in the beginning was hilarious! Even more so was their outfits! Kuro-tan's in DENIAL about his hairy legs. Poor, poor Kuro-min. The part where Kuro-chu was thinking about how much he missed Fai-chan was darling. I can't wait until the reunion!!

Ooh, Kurogane's showing off his sexy legs :D The disguises are really funny (snicker). “Yay.” Hee hee, so cute! We need to wait for three more chapters for KuroFai?! Wah, update soon please!

Ok ,he cmputer I'm on is a virtual tortise. It didn't even register that I had typed something for fiften minuts! Stnkin' ancient technology.

Anyway,now I can actually review! This chapter was quit god, I lvd your interpretation of Krogane in a sailor suit1 Funny funny funny. And with man-hairy legs. Hillarity ensued. Kuromyu relly can be childish sometimes. But dressing up Sakura as a boy/ wow. idn't se that one cmi, and of course all the tourists staring at them.

Se ya soon1
-SKF

LOL!! I was laughing at Kurogane's costume but I was laughing even HARDER when he said yay!! *snigger* That's almost as funny as when he said hyuu in the anime (in the only episode i watched >w

Seriously, loompie woompie? Just with that the mafia doesn't seem half as menacing to me, even though I fully know they are.

Ah, how childish of Kuro-rin. "Yay". Somehow, that line just made my day. ^.^

-Y.A.O.G

i love it! but when will there be kurofai T_T

OMG HAHA! Kuro tan as a women would have been hilarous! him as an uncle is also funny!

Aw. More sympathy for Fai. *Hands a box-full to him* It's getting interesting! Not that it wasn't amazing before, but no it's even more so. Hmm... the only thing I can really think of that's both ridiculous and possible would be... a policeman with short shorts. :D

hmm... ridiculous outfits? how abaout a tophat? maybe a fedora. It'd be funny to make him rsemble someone from the mafia, but it wouldn't work plot-wise. How about a shiphand? He's got the muscles for it, the tan, and there re lots of foreigners on ships. You could dress him in the sailor outfit with the blue collar and the little white hat! the story could be that the mom and daughter are spending the day with thier uncle,s howing hima round the city while he's on shore leave in italy. Heheh.

See ya soon!
-SKF

(sob) Fai's nightmare's just awful (very well written though). I hope it doesn't come true :( On the other hand...hee hee, Subaru's crossdressing XD Can't wait to see their disguises!

LOL!! That was hilarious! Kuro-chii's gonna get a heart attack. Sorry, I don't have any ideas really. Maybe a circus people? That would really kill Kurogane >-

Love it. Keep writing.