interesting!! but there wasn't enough Xeno action! Timothy is upset about that! :)

Hmm this seems interesting... hope you update soon :D

Good chapter glad you decide to update. You should have let her interact with the Xeno before pulling her out.

I really like your story, very original, or at least it is to me.
Can't wait 'til the next chapter.

what happens next? what happens next? i must know!