I LOVE IT!
Yay- zombies :3
Your writing style is always incredibly indulgent, and makes a fantastic read. Your characterisation is gorgeous and I can not wait to see what you do with this plot line!
Like everyone else, I'm an avid follower of True Ellision- but I'll read whatever you write, because I know you'll do an amazing job of it either way.
Can't wait for an update from you soon!

A 360 word introduction! This is the most riveting beginning I've ever read .. heart pounding cliff hanger end aside, you do an excellent of job of description and narration, developing character and plot flawlessly.

I'm waiting on tenterhooks for the next chapter!

--AH - my calm review just belies my excitement!

I'll be honest: I read this late last night, and I had a bit of trouble falling asleep.

That, of course, only means you're doing a great job writing such a creative idea. I definitely want to see this story continued, maybe even more than I want to read the rest of "True Elision"...maybe. Sort of. I love both of them. =)

Awesome story idea! I can't believe no one has thought of this before! Though I'm glad it's you, that means we readers can expect it to be written in a good way :D

Your story is absolutely amazing; it's hard finding a decent Death Note horror fic, but I was lucky enough to stumble upon yours! Your writing is excellent, you stay true to the characters' personalities, and it's just a really good storyline. The last half of the second chapter gave me chills! I hope you update this story in the near future; it really is quite interesting!

please update asap!! i want to know what happens next!!

OMG

I LOVE this!! It's amazing, who would've thought all those people the Death Note killed would come back to life (That's what I'm assuming anyway)? When L and Light got THE call at 3 something in the morning and L was acting all like "!?" I was racing through the chapter at unprecedented speeds, and I definitely was NOT expecting zombies!

On a slightly unrelated note: I can't wait for True Elision to be updated! I'm dieing waiting for an update even thought I haven't ever reviewed that story...sorry...

But anyway I can't wait for this to be updated either so...hurry? Lolz XD

Until next time!

Waow! I totally want to read the next chapter (I feel like it's going to be a great fic), you've got everything a death note addict wants : original plot, (really) well written story, deep analysis of the personalities of the characters (frankly, the whole thing with watari being afraid for L and his obsessions was stunning, it made me look diferentluy at the entire manga!) and the promise of YAOÏ!
Well, great job and keep going like that please (we wants to know what will happend next -will the zombies start to eat brains?)! ^^

Where the heck do you get your ideas? Do you drink obscene amounts of coffee before you write or set a Tsugumi Ohba voo-doo doll and complete a ritual??

I seriously almost died laughing when I realized what was happening. The dead coming back to life? I've thought of something similar: the dead souls of former Death Note users landing in the same place as the souls of those who have been killed by the DN and some sort of... flesh-eating ghouls come to dig their dirty, rotting nails into...

...well, you get the point.

You are officially God, Ruler and Commander of all that exists in the Death Note fandom.

You rule.

Oh my god. This story is going to be so epic. I know it. Absolutely loving this right now, and extra props given for keeping Raito and L in character. Ahasdlkj I'm sort of freaking out right now because the plot looks amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Keep it up!

You Know,

Zombies scare the crap outta me, so I was honestly surprised when you took that turn with the plot. But, despite my fears, I fully intend to read this story through. It's very well done, please do continue as soon as possible. I can't wait to see what happens next.


~Reigh~

WOW. this is definitely entertaining. thumbs up to you dude! i absolutely love how you characterized L and the fact that the dead are coming back to life is an interesting spin. I do wonder if it is somehow connected with the Death Note! update soon please! :)

I was wondering, have you read Of Music ?

What a kick-** start!

Fabulous. I want to know how this plays out...

Do update!

God, I love your writing...

It has both lavish detail and a fast moving plot--usually traits that are compromised for the other.

For some reason, this line popped out at me:
"Paradoxically, it was exactly because of his overdeveloped intelligence and genius that L was so industrious with hiding and camouflaging these obsessions of his, even from himself."

Stunning eloquence. It seems you know your characters like the back of your hand and you develop them well.