Nice story. Very engaging, good discriptions, fitting dialogue, action packed...but it seemed like the last chapter just sortof...ended...quickly...almost like you were ready to be done with it. I was hoping for more in the end, but I really enjoyed it overall. Of course, if they, "the telepathic aliens", good revive Alberts why didn't they revive Alberts' team mates? Didn't they die too? Would have like more on the aliens. Still, very nice. Thank you for posting.

This is a great story. I loved everything about it. I smiled when they smiled, I laughed when they laughed and I cringed when they were in pain. I was able to picture this whole story. I even saw the look that Jack had for a moment that made Sam shiver and I enjoyed picturing the kid in Jack. What a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing
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excellent story. dunno why I'm so into Jack abuse. Loved your aliens. I like how you didn't overuse them. Great job.

I enjoyed your story. Keep writing. You write the characters well and true to the show. Keep up the good work.

Good fic, great whump, nice ending.

Thanks for sharing.

i really liked it.hope you plan to write more jack whump fic...

thats a hard plan for sam to accept.

nice to see carter so strong..love the interaction ,verbala nd noverbal between carter and jack

poor jack...youve written this so well...hope help arrives in time

glad carter si there to comfort and help oneil...hope helpa rrives soon.,but not too soon,

of course they want jack...who wouldnt...lol

i love this fic alreadya dn with some promised jack whump ,i know i am going to love it.

that was great..well done.
thought allthe lil aspects u put in but yeyknew he wud b fine!!
o but dark Jack intriging indeed...love it!
was a great story n very much enjoyed reading it!

I liked it. :) Sad to see it end, but enjoyed the ride. :D

Sure enjoyed this ride! I hope you post something else soon! Thanks! :-)