i love it...you did fantastic with descriptions, metaphors, themes, and word choice! the only thing i would do if i were you is change the title of the chapter, its sort of weird. :)

Oh yea... I never did like Brook anyway. I'm so glad you updated!

Oh yea... I never did like Brook anyway. I'm so glad you updated!

Aww! This story is so cute! Love this story so far. Keep going on this story! Update of soon!

Peace, whitestat091

This is really cool. period.

Meh...

No! That is so unfair! I've waited forever for this thing to update and now I get all excited for an update and you give me an author's note! -glare- Not right, my friend.

Ohh! So dramatic! I can't wait to see a jealous Squirrelpaw, so exciting! x D

this story is cool plz continue

-claps- One of the better stories of FanFiction, I must say. It is nicely written and flows nicely with the journey. StormXSquirrel is pretty cute too.

good chapter. I don't want Brook stealing Stormfur away from squirrelpaw. I won't like that at all. What I like is how jealous she is of Stormfur's obvious little crush on Brook. Update soon.

((throws her hands into the air)) WHOOPIE!! I love this story! And chocolate chip cookies! Alright! Please update more! ((takes a cookie))

nice

I love it!:D
Very vivid,intruguing,and just AMAZING.
Whoa.Please,continue.

I love StormxSquirrel! It's adorable. Stormfur is one of my very favorite characters, and while Squirrelflight is not, she could have been if she wasn't with Brambleclaw. I agree with Rubyheart481 on that one.

This is awesome, keep it up! ^^