 Ace-of-Cyberspace13 8/7/10 . chapter 1Poor Lance. Poor, poor Lance. He has some serious problems.
-Ace |
 Ace-of-Cyberspace13 8/7/10 . chapter 1Poor Lance. Poor, poor Lance. He has some serious problems.
-Ace |
 gem1990 10/17/08 . chapter 1Cute, funny, sad, sweet, wonderful and great! |
 Ariadne'sThread 1/22/07 . chapter 1Aw bless! I love the brotherhood so much, especially the way you write them. |
 big brother 5/9/06 . chapter 1 i like this fic, it was short, sweet, and to the point! i like the way you wrote todd and freddy, but i thought lance was out of character, if not extremely funny. |
 dogbertcarroll 8/17/04 . chapter 1Touching and Funny! |
 Guin 6/10/04 . chapter 1Did Lance have a lance? Hee hee. Anyway. Like it. Short but very very good. Well done! |
 Gothicthundra 1/1/04 . chapter 1that was like totally awesome! |
 WormmonABC 6/27/03 . chapter 1They have suits of armor for rent? O_O |
 Cri 6/22/03 . chapter 1 Hm... only Fred would say,"Grandma was right," and "Let's get something to eat." in the same sentence. Insane, you are. |
 BlazeStryker 2/11/03 . chapter 1Ya know.. it's just sad when a perfectly Bad Bad-Boy goes all braindead in love.
but it's fun to watch!
Later. |
 Voicegirl 10/5/02 . chapter 1 Not much to say but: AWWWWWWWWWWW aren't they CUUUUUUTTTTTEEEEEEE! (Fred and Toad give her dirty looks.) |
 Gecko 10/12/01 . chapter 1 Oh, how heart-warming! I like reading heart-warming things every now and then. And the part where Lance came out in the armor was brilliant and it completely shows that just because it's a light hearted fic that pulls a few heart strings, it doesn't mean that it still can't have some zaniness w/out sucking. Really cool in all the right places. |
 The Phantom 10/12/01 . chapter 1 Cute. :) |
 kawaii neko sakura 10/12/01 . chapter 1lol sooooo funny! kepp up the great work! |