Hi,
NICE

That was a great chapter! I really enjoyed the interaction between aura and Logan. I think you brought everything together well. I wis hpoor Warren hadn't gone to Acopolpse, but it was like that in the first place. SO I guess that makes sense. I really enjoyed Magneto's meeting it was really great and well put together. The whole exploding toilet thing was cute, though a little OC. But it was fun. Way for new X-men! I loved the chapter and I really can't wait for more! Thanks!
~Paige

Ah...sorry for the late review. I'm a lazy procrastinator, I know.

Anyways--my favorite scene was definitely the recruitment one with the students. There were a few lines that definitely made me laugh. I wonder who's gonna be the field leader...?

Speaking of wondering, I'm extremely excited to see whether or not Magneto's mission to destroy the lab is successful and not to mention what-on-Earth the "ultimate weapon" is. Nothing pleasant, I can assume.

The scene with Laura and Logan was also very good, seeing how Laura interacts with the others should be...interesting.

Update soon!

excelente, great job! other than the fact that Rogue seemed to be completely out of the running, i enjoyed this a lot.

. “Stuff like this is why I wish we would’ve kept the same director for all three movies.” he mumbled as he lit the cigar and took a puff. “Wouldn’t be in this mess if Scott were still here.” that was epic! i laughed so much with that. And, actually, you should blame Fox for not waiting for both Singer and Marsden to be done with Superman, as well as Paquin with Margaret.

keep up the great work!

laenamoradadeROGUE

Story: I love all the different storylines you've got going on! It's nice to be reading about new and sometimes forgotten mutants every now and again (i.e. Bishop, Nightcrawler, Emma Frost, Jubilee)

Chapter: i LOVE LOVE LOVE that movie/director line!! OMG! that was just amazing! And it's true! so very very true!

HI,
WOW! That was great! I liked the scene with Nightcrawler and Acopolipse. Poor Kurt! GO HIM! I think the scene was great! I thought it was an interesting twist adding Raven in. I have heard a little about Irene, but not much! I wonder why she is so important to Raven, I am sure I will find out! I liked the way you had Logan put Ororo's position in poerspective! I am in aw at how you keep all of these plots straight! It is amazing, you are a great author! KUDOS! I like getting the update, though I know how it feels I just updated Mystique's Beginging after about three months, and the returnign isn't much better. Thanks for writing it was great!!
~Paige

Wow...very good chapter, Ojex. The first part was my favorite--your dialog is always very good--but not to mention, that fight against Apocalypse and Kurt was brilliantly written, even though it was small.

I'm very curious what will happen next! =D Update soon!

(Oh yeah, I have to ask...what happened to Power Struggle? It seems to have disappeared.)

Hi,
I loved it! The meeting with X-23 was perfect. It was also good to see Hanks limited perspective of teh only threats, The plot is really involved. I don't know how you can keep track of everything. I wonder what will happen to Warren, I wonder who this new girl is. My extent of X-men comic books is running short. I thought I knew a lot, but you have got me. I know more on Wolverine though. I enjoy reading him when he is written write. You write him well, it will be interesting to see how he reacts to X-23 or Lauren. Anyways I can't wait to read more! I hope you update soon! Thanks!
~Paige

Hi,
Wow, that was really great! I relly liked seeing Logan witty banter come back. It is fun to see everything adding into everything else. I can't wait to see what will happen in Washington, Bolivar Trask, that can only mean one thing, Sentinals! I wonder who the girl at Alkili lake will be, maybe X-23. I will be wondering what Apocalypse will do. I like seeing Boby doing things just to plese Rogue. I like how you are adding other things along with others like the mutantion curing thing. I will be interested in seeing where this goes! ^_^ Great job!
~Paige

Hi,
I really liked thestart of this!! I hadn't realized you had this story up! The bit with Waren and his Dad was a great twist! I liked how you introduced most of the old characters and the amazing new ones! I really loved the story. Ilike seeing Remy, Emma, Havoc, and all of the others! It was great! I like it more then my own story about after the third movie! Thanks for a great story!
~Paige

Exciting, maybe a future romy?!?

Awesome chapter! The part where James, Lucas, and Logan were tracking down the girl was my favorite. I think you definitely did that the best. And yay! I guessed right with Warren. Although it's actually not that good for him, he doesn't know what he's getting himself into...

Great job building up the suspense (it's what you do best!) and...update soon!

Wow! Great fight scenes in this chapter--and some parts of this story is reminding me of Seven Sins. Also, there were some funny lines here--like John's 'witty' comeback "Yeah, well you're ugly!" XD

Something gives me the feeling Warren is gonna meet the Apocalypse group soon... I can't help but wonder still, if the 'cured' mutant's powers are gonna come back or not...

This is an interesting story! =D I loved the X-men movies, although I haven't seen them in a while...

Anyways, great job with the characters and their personalities, the OC's fit in perfectly and the situations in this chapter were very believable. Warren's dad was such a jerk! I can't believe he did that! Well, actually I can...but still!

I can guess what's coming up next...the 3rd movie ended up with the cure no longer taking affect, right? So Rouge would have her powers, and the brotherhood, and Warren...who's gonna be angry I'm guessing.

Update soon!

-Jane