Sweetness, this is really good. :)

thats so good!

i loved when Max said, "If you say one more word, I'll make those your last words." hahaha!! lol

everybody makes fang too outgoing. he would never do that, and we know it.

but still, kudos! loved it other than the major OOC-ness.

aw, that is so sweet. i love it =)

Aw, that's so sweet! Great job on the fluff, it wasn't overly fluffy but just fluffy enough. If that made any sense... Anyway, awesomeness! ~Sunny

awh -sniffle-
how do u come up with this? HOW?
I LOVE IT!
Rozzie x (sniffle)

that's cool. really cute, actually, but what exactly DOES she say? it's a little confusing for me when other people write amazing stories, but i don't get them. but it's good. really good. i think it's awsome.

Just...aw. I loved it. So fuzzy.

aw!
so uber cute!

That was...AWESOME!

Cute! I assume this time is different than the time with the Valium because this time he can't convince himself it was just the drugs talking? Max is pretty in character, and so is Fang. Nice job.

-A.

Aw thats cute =]

AW
Loved it. Alot.

Aw...So cute! It could like be a part of a MaxRide book...