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| Yemi Hikari 2008-08-16 ch 1, | abuseThe only thing propperly capitalized in this are the Proper nouns... other things are capitalized too. Also, the Brain... he doesn't work at the Suger Bowl. His family owns an ice cream shop that is seperate from the Suger Bowl. This is other wise a nice start. I wonder though... how much math notes would a student have to take in the forth grade? |
| Mumble 101 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseyou are the best author on this website :) |