OMG Not only was it a great lemon but the ending was very well though out! This was a hell of alot more deeper than many oneshots (Unless u continue it though i don't really see the need to) I've read and ended better too. Great job!

Oh my god, that was just beautiful! xD
The sex scene was fantastic, perfectly detailed and interesting, but that last little section was just perfect. Romantic Jiranaru fics are the sweetest tings ever, when done right, and this was definitely well done! =)
Adding to favourites~

I loved it... very good.

That was the perfect ending. I loved it! Great job.

This is a very well written lemon. The pairing is one that you don't see often so thanks for putting this up. Good job!

Aw, why'd you have to stop? Keep going!

aw that was so cute ^-^ i lvoed the lemony part too but the ending gah! good ending but it was kinda a cliffy? is there gonna be more?

... O_O -heart stops- ... tha...thats the end?!

hehe that was a good ending X3 I could see a writer do that when they can't actually say it yet. X3

Oh my god this ending moved me to tears. I love it. this is an all time fave. If I make an Naruto C2 this will be the first story added. This completely made my day. Thank you.

OMG! That's so sweet! The ending is absolutely adorable! Kyaa! Lovely! At first I though Naru was going to be like a girl in the whole fic *shudder* thank god that no^^. hehehe.. AWESOME fic. Great job and as I said fabulous ending.

Aw!! That was so good!! That was the first Jiraiya/ Naruto fic I've read. I never really thought of Jiraiya as fic material but *sigh* that was pure fabulousness. I love the ending the most (not to say I didn't enjoy the lemon part...)

Wow! That was extremely well written and very sweet. I don't exactly go goo-goo gah-gah over an uke Naruto but i actually liked him in this fic. It was awesome. I also think u got the characters dead on and ended this extremely uniquely. Fabulous!

VERY KAWAII! I LOVE IT I REALLY DO!! XD i usally dont like naruto unless he's with lee or something... BUT ITS TRULY AWESOME! i dont know how you did it but i LIKE THE TWO FOR ONCE!!
lee. KIMIMARO SHES RAMBLING ON AGAIN!
kimimaro. *stabs nene*
me. *dies* X_x
kakashi. O.o you killed her...
Gai. nice going -.-

One of the best stories I've ever read. I don't think I can review it well enough XD. The ending was magic. Same goes for the rest of it too X3. You had me about to cry at "Naruto forced himself to believe that he was talking about that morning." Then smiling not even 5 minutes later with the end :3.

I loves :3