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| Protector of Canon2 2008-06-19 ch 4, | abuseI hate Ollie. I mean, he did get better, but at this point? I hate Ollie. |
| :) 2008-06-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseIt looks like Roy is on the right track, thanks to Dick! |
| Deep ocean5 2008-06-15 ch 3, | abuseGreat story. Lots of impact...but is this the end? It kind feels like its lacking something. Like it's just a 'what junkies go through in withdrawl' story and not really calling on the deep freindship between Roy and Dick, yeah, it's there because Dick wouldn't have done that for just anyone, but Dick's had to be controlling and bossy to get them both through this so it would have been nice to see some of the deeper emotions the aftermath brings. Also what reactions the extended family will have to this. I was so loving this an then I got to the end and went "Wha..? This is finished?' :( But, still a really well researched story and good writing. |
| Among The Betrayed 2008-06-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseI read the whole thing in five minutes- and it was awsome! |
| :) 2008-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThank goodness Roy has Dick there to help him out- I hope everything really turns out well, Roy can't afford to go down that road again! |
| Protector of Canon2 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseMinor issue in an otherwise good story: at this point, Babs was still Batgirl. There was no Oracle. Oh, and is Flyboy over? |
| Skoellya 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI've not had the opportunity to read the comics where Roy's dealing with his drug addiction, so this story in particular interests me. Having read a lot of your other stories (as a lurker), I respect how you can handle issues that fanfic rarely uses (but comics do, go figure). Whilst obviously not going to be a happy floppy bunnies fic, I think the first chapter has a really good balance in it between Rationality/Discovery and Roy's own personal situation. Looking forward to more. |