   Pandora-Pleasant-1996 9/12/09 . chapter 6Amazing chapter, you did really well.
Yeah, Sheldon's gonna freak out. My guess is he tries to blow up Evanselli's head with his mind powers D. That, I would pay to see XD.
Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Raven-Raspera 5/9/09 . chapter 6 Heehee, the elixir is piss. I want Sharpayo to die. I hate HSM so much. . |
| Crysta Mayville 4/4/09 . chapter 6 You did great with the lyrics here. It was amazingly creative! I loved it! |
| Nausicaa of the Spirits 4/3/09 . chapter 6 Great to see you again, Harry's Girl! And you made a little mistake. Shouldn't it be 'Da queen of da swordsmen, da swordsman of queens" and "And I-da so-famous Evanselli?" Other than that it was good! Update soon! |
| Lolli-of-doom 12/26/08 . chapter 5 haha! this is great! update soon! XP |
| Crysta Mayville 9/26/08 . chapter 5 lol... yes, ew. That art grosses me out too... great chapter! Sorry for not reviewing sooner... homework... |
| Nausicaa of the Spirits 9/26/08 . chapter 5 Now, if you ask me, when Quartermaine was ogling me, that, my friend is called, him being a pedophile. *having fallen into a hole and climbing out, grabbing a sword* I'm gonna kill him! I'm gonna kill that DUMB, SLIMY, STUPID-HEADED, rabbit killer! Update soon! |
| Nausicaa of the Spirits 9/20/08 . chapter 4 Ooh, then you better hurry up with that homework so you can get working on that next chapter with me in it! Now, get going! Go! Go! Go! |
| Falling Stardust 9/20/08 . chapter 4 Oh, I just was reading through it again, and I saw William Van Dort, and I waved at the computer screen because Corpse Bride IS AWESOME LIKE THIS CHAPTER! |
| Surfer Girl Forevuh 9/20/08 . chapter 4 OMG YES! I friggin love you girl! You rock! I just watched Sweeny Todd for the first time Monday and fell in love with it! Omg keep going! I wanna know what happens! |
| Ninja Master 9/14/08 . chapter 3 Cant to read more. |
| Ninja Master 9/14/08 . chapter 1 Very good! You should continue it! |
| Crysta Mayville 8/18/08 . chapter 3 Awesome, dude! Keep it up! |
| Falling Stardust 8/13/08 . chapter 3 Um...Odd, but fun. I like Sweeney Todd, and I'm glad to find a parody(parodies are so deliciously weird...)Anyway, GIMME THE SOUR PATCH KIDS! Update quickly, please! |
| Nausicaa of the Spirits 8/12/08 . chapter 3 You made a little mistake. The lyrics say, "Oh, where is Judge Turpin? she asks' when it's supposed to be 'Oh, where is Judge Quartermaine?' *glares at Victor, pulls out a long stick and tries to hit him with it, but he screams and dodges it* Hold still!
Victor: *avoiding all those hits* Hey, stop that!
Me: You cowardly cad! *continues to hit Victor with it, who keeps dodging*
Victor: Please, oh no!
Me: Procrastinating pest! *screams angrily* Aggravating arse!
Victor: *running off* Someone save me! Oh!
Me: You eel in hunter's clothing!
Victor: HELP! SHE'S GONE STARK RAVING MAD *last part echoes*
Me: Update soon! Now, it's only a matter of time before he's gonna ask ME to marry him in the story and I can't wait to meet dear old Will Turner! |
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