O.o This was, unnaturally creepy. I LOVE CREEPY! I also love Lifty and Shifty, (Bonus) and Mime (Another bonus) And YAY! Lumpy died a cruel and painful death! I mean, come on, it's about time something cruelly killed him. (Pauses to think for a moment) Though if Lumpy didn't exist, think how little death there would be. Aw well, LONG LIVE LIFTY AND SHIFTY, THE CUTEST RACCOONS WHO EVER LIVED!

Very nice. I like Rhyme's charachter in this one. He's so delightfully demented.

Oh my sweet lord oh my sweet adorable God, this was surprisingly the best reading I have well... read in a super long while, omg I'm so speechless right now omg, I feel so sorry for everione who died in it especially Lumpy and Flippy, but Lumpy omg din't deserved that very crue punishment it was his stupid mistake to accidently kill Rhyme omg seriously I loved it even if the ending was kinda sad but happy it is the best reading ever seriously I admire you more than I ever did b4 good no awesome job.

Sincerly: Juicebee:D