Bella doesn't know what's coming! I think you did a great job writing this!

Interesting and entertaining fic.

Thanks.

It was nice to read about Bella's life before Edward in this story, because we know so little about it. Great job!

"I also doubted that anything remotely interesting would ever happen in that tiny little overcast town."

BWAH!

I think you nailed it, this is probably exactly the thought process Bella went through. Well done!

I love the way you characterized Bella in this story. I think it stuck with what she was like in the books.

I liked Bella's internal struggle to go to Forks. I also liked how you had her help her mom through the process of her leaving.

aww...Bella's so selfless. I luved they the way u portrayed her.

Love this story! Heard it rec'd on the Temptation Twilight Fanfic podcast and I agree with them, it perfectly fits with my vision of Bella and how she decided to go to Forks. Nice! The year and a half without sunlight line & title are perfect.

An excellent character study. You've capture the moment between Renee and Bella so well. Perhaps, given Renee's tendency to worry over things, this conversation would have lasted a semester, and not the one moment here, but this story has it perfectly crafted, capturing this instant in the eternity that has set Bella's fate.

I really like how you provided insight to Bella's choice and her life before Twilight. Your one-shots are really good, and I am reading Ashes now...and I love it!

Loved it! It was great getting a chance to see Bella before she moved to Forks. That's probably how it really would have happened to!

Love it. This is the part of Twilight that made me empathize with Bella having to leave lovely sunny AZ and move somewhere cold and rainy.

you are awesome at one-shots...

Wow. I really enjoyed this. I think you super nailed Bella. In fact, I could read this pre Twilight and think Twilight was a continuation of your story. It was seriously awesome!

yay ren! thanks so much for more stories :)

you really got into bella in this one... and renee too. aren't you just so clever? ha ha.

it fit with twilight and her reasoning then too.