Same problem. Wonderfully written, yet empty. Do they love each other? I can not tell from your story. I'm sorry.

Aw! So sweet!

Very romantic! Especially your description of love, that was very deep. I don't know what was so fluffy here, it was very realistic and emotional. I really liked your separate sentences, they made a really good ascent on Cindy's thoughts.
A very well done fic, I surely want more on the subject.

That was so adorable. Extremely cute. Very fluffy, I absolutely loved it. Great job, you truly captured the moment. Well done. ^_^

Your reader,
Miss Mudblood

So, so good. Sad and sweet but with a happy ending that they deserve.

Very nice! I loved the way it was written.
Awesome job at this one-shot! =)

That was so so so CUTE! Write more! I LOVED IT!

Very nice interaction. Great one-shot.

Keep the good writing.