i rly liked the suki and zuko one. :)

That mustache is terrible isn't it. When I saw I thought to myself he looked a whole lot better without it.

That mustache must die!!

That was a wonderful story! You truly seem to be an experienced writer, and I like your style. Personally, Toph was my favorite chapter, and I agree- Haru's mustache must be terminated.

As long as you still write, I'll be happy. ^_^ You will still write even though Avatar is over right? Cuz these were really good.

*ish sad*


TT_TT

YES. YES. TEO KNOWS ZUTARA WILL WIN. *sparkles*

Ahaha, just had to share that that little piece of gold about Teo noticing Zuko's affections made me squeal inside. As well as "Teo was curious as to when the third player would seek him out." -- I WANT THAT CONFRONTATION :O

Anyway. This, again, was wonderful. I loved how you made Teo so true to form, acting as the calm, quiet, listening figure while Aang and Haru rave about their problems. Oh, and he totally burned Katara! xD Talking about how she didn't pay attention to the two. TEO KNOWS, YES HE DOES.

(But then again she only cares for Zuko xDD)

EXCELLENT AS ALWAYS, WIFEY! Can't wait for the next installment~

[[Gray-Rain Skies]]

Their little meets had become: HLA, Hair Loopies Anonymous, Aang liked to say.

lmao.


i love you. and i love teo.
he's adorable. AND OMFG THE DUKE
I LOVE THE DUKE.

but wait - this was good. like really good, i love you and suki all - I PHAILZORZ...but its all NU UH. EPIC LIES.


i liked it :D

Lol...you-koh. I get it.
Mmph...teehee. you-Koh.
That was...funny.
Ahem...on to business...mmph...you-ko!
Okay, really, now. About this chap. Luved it! I can't believe you said that your characterizations re BAD!
OMM...we need a mental health specialist over here if you ACTUALLY think that, lol!
It's practically blasphemy! OMM!
I love Toph, and I have probably studied her the most out of ALL Avatar characters, not to be in-your-face, but sometimes I think that the only person that is more in-tune with her and her personality is Bryke!
You definitely proved me wrong. I luved the one-sided Tokka and Sukka, they were extremely realistic, which I liked, and the Toph/Aang friendship was good too, no OOC-ness at ALL, which I liked, and the major cuteness that made me want to squeal like a crazed fan, but at the same time, the watching-an-episode feel to it. Which I liked.
A LOT!
Keep up the fantastic work...it's hidden wonders like these that brighten the most boring, shadowy corners of my life in sun-like radiance!
Much luv,
JFAPOI

First of all, I have to say, wonderful, beautiful chapter. Although, I don't think Appa is that old. Based on inferences from what I've seen on the show, he's probably, at most, around five or six years old. Not knowing myself how long Air Bisons live, I can't say whether or not he IS old. If Bisons are life-long companions...?
I completely agree with the 'old but not old' statement. I believe that a person is only as old as they think they are. Like my mom, for instance. She's been thirty-three for years now, and that won't change, so she says, even when her body's ninety! It's the body that grows old, not the spirit! Looking forward to more chapters!
Much luv,
JFAPOI

OMM! I must say, I really couldn't turn away from that 'Go' button. This story deserves a wonderful and detailed review if I ever read one, and it's only the first chapter!
Okay, I'll start at the beginning. I think you potrayed Zuko WONDERFULLY. Beneath his hard, angry exterior, I think he's a modest, interesting guy that deserves such a wonderful surrogate family as he has been put into, and I am so excited for him. I loved the ending, it was brilliantly crafted and exactly what I imagined Zuko to say in such an instance.
The Suki/Zuko interaction was well-written, very heartfelt, and very entertaining. A point, though, that I'd like to make is that some people may see it as shippy, and therefore may dislike it if their preferred ship is interrupted. I say ignore those who may flame because of that, and don't think any less of yourself for displeasing someone, if it does happen, because you're an awesum writer, and don't you forget it!!
Good job on this chap, I'm looking very much forward to reading the others!
Much luv,
JFAPOI

SQUEE. SSQUUEE.

I'M SO SLUGGISH RIGHT NOW. I WISH I COULD EXPRESS MY LOVE FOR THIS.


but i DO. I DO. I DO.

lovelovelove.

AWW. TOPH.

Oh my goodness, you've made my love for Tokka grow SO MUCH. It's just so sad, with Sokka doting on Suki as she has to sit by and watch. Again, you've carried out the prompt spectacularly well. It's just so lovely and heartbreaking and wonderful, and if I could favor it again and again and again, I so would. PLUS. PLUS. Toph/Aang friendship, for the win. OMG, I've become such a SUCKER for that recently.

So I don't know why you hate this. I thought it was sweet and cute and really wonderful. And Sokka. OH, Sokka. xD You make me adore him more than I already do.

Keep up the amazing work, Wifey!

P.S. "she loves Zuko and not you-ko!" LOL.

[[SUKI]]

Loved both Zuko's and Hakoda's. It's nice to see a lot of family/friendship fics in this place! And you're a really good writer, it's great to see Zuko/Suki interaction too, and yours is really well-put together.

More please! :)

*ahem* AS I GIGGLE AND GO OHMYGOSH AT 3 AM. The little ohio girl is tired now. BUT in my haze of half dreaming, i've discovered this and been reawakend. oh what glory you bring to the avatar universe. whether it be joor amazing toph, what with her calling out and the major lol factor of it all. or the tearful nightmare that KATourtney!had about a blood bending **. and epic tears of bondyness.

and of course appa and momo speak for themselves.

the amazing characterazation. and the pure joy this has brought me reading this. IT MAKES ME LOVE YOU AN INCH MOAR THAN I DID FIVE SECONDS AGO. IF IT'S EVEN POSSIBLE.

because this so totally epic :D