i love your fluff!

makes sam happy :)

It would be just Bella's luck to get sunburned in an overcast town like Forks. Lucky her to have a family of "cool" vampires to help her feel better.

aww

keep writing,

italy

Very, very cute. I adored it. Please update soon. I love Alice's line to Carlisle. :)

How sweet! Nice, light, fluffy story. I loved it.

Hi again! Love the fluff. I LOVE fluff in general, but your's is the best: canon-compliant, in-character, and spoken in a mature tone. I couldn't find any glaring mistakes. But then again, isn't that an author's goal? To be so good that even the most critical colleague can't find a fault? Or to be so talented that said colleague doesn't care about the mechanical errors? That is my goal. I want people to love my stories so much that they don't sweat the details. I'm pretty sure you've met that goal, or are really close. I'm still trying. I actually prefer proofreading to writing; I'm not terribly creative and I prefer writing nonfiction to fiction. I always aced reports but didn't excel that much on short stories. I was always like you- the girl with the red pen that everyone went to for help. I did increase many a grade. Well, if I have time tonight, I will fix How Could He? and repost. I only have the middle of the night to write, so it's not always my best. I have to clean and run errands all day then I work all night till almost midnight. Hence my frustration and impatience.

Oh, I'm bursting with the news- I got a new bookcase! For some, that's no big deal. But I have almost four hundred books and my two bookcases are falling apart and overfilled. It's sad when your books hold up the shelves and not the other way around, haha. I'm happy. I might start fixing my books tonight and write tomorrow. I'll just get no sleep. I don't care! I have a bookcase!

Much love,

Chelsea

P.S: I loved this story and hope to see another one or a Cupcakes update soon. I love how you pick new ideas for stories. We need more authors like you on this site.

OMG. Catchy title. Hilarious story. Wonderfully pictured characters. Amazingly cute moments. GOOD JOB!

It's my first reading of a Twilight fanfiction and I certainly don't regret it! Having caught sunburns all over my body today.. i totally love this story!lol, good luck and write more! :D

-xox-

Summer Lover

Even though I was perhaps the most badly damaged from the event, I had the best first aid. Everyone else was at home nursing their wounds with some Aloe Vera at most. - hahaha... funny way to put it... Edward could be my Aloe Vera anytime

sweet :)

Aw...

good thing her lips weren't burned ;)

aww now that was fluff and am-ma-za-zing fluff a that cant wait fo rmore!

aw! what a cute story! that sounds so much like bella, it's not even funny...lol. great job, very cute!

PIXIE

wow. FLUFFY! yay! it was really good. in my opion it should be in Twilight but im not Stephenie Meyer. *sigh* keep writing

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I'm So Lucky Lucky- Lucky Twice

Aw, the fluffyness, its so adorable!

Cute cute story, were you sunburned when you wrote it?

I loved it, its going on the fave list for sure :)

loveloveloveLOVE it!

so sweet... so fluffy..

we all need a bit of fluff to keep us going

hmm...

i wonder if you'll do anymore fluffy ones..