It really has...
10/10

i love these kind of stories where people think wierd perverted thoughts and it turns out to be something totally inoccent! or is it? ;P

Laughs,quite funny.

You wrote such a great story I feel that I shall grace you with my first ever review. So here I go.

It was funny, I like how you used the Juice Box thing, I got a great laugh outta it! This was really funny, good and exciting to read! I liked it a lot!

hahahahahhah SO FUNNY! Laughed my bumm off and didn't stop til the end!

OMG That made me laugh so much! You're a fantastic writer, I hope you do some more funny stories like this one! :D

hey Natasha that was a lovely revision but the other one was really good too

wow.

this is pretty good...NOT!

Its amazing!

it could not have been better in any way shape or form!

10/10!

Innuendo's are so awesome. It's classic, simply classic. It's fun trying to guess what they're actually doing. Characterization was perfect. I could see this happening. Well done. Thanks for sharing! -KG

LMAO
omg this is genuis
i was laughing so hard...hiccup

I was actually trying not to think of them doing it, while rukia was in the closet that would be wrong.

Nice juice box thingy!