that was a nice representation of serena and raye's friendship. not many authors go and write about their friendship and its sad how many darien/serena fics there are where raye is the villain. i mean, i know they fight a lot but i think raye truly cares about serena.

you did a great job portraying that and i really liked this fic! and the end was perfect . . . them arguing like always.

great work! :D

I love your story it was great.

Nice fic! :)

Great job with this fic! It was the perfect blend of seriousness and comedy. I love how you write Serena and Raye. Neither one is completely at fault and they both love each other the way good friends do.