 DanceOfTheWhiteMoon 2008-10-14 . chapter 4Love it! I wanna know what happened to Rukia though... I hope its not ANGST or TRAGEDY! I hate those! But so far, I like the feel of your story. Update soon...?
Peace
DOTWM |
 Uchiha, Nami 2008-10-09 . chapter 4 Hi Higura!
I love your fanfics! :) You have some of the best pairings. This is one of my favorite fanfictions. Also, you might want to check out this other really cute Bleach pairing: Shunsui x Nanao. They're kinda like IchiRuki. :P
~Uchiha, Nami |
 Phillip William-Wammy 2008-10-09 . chapter 4Don't worry, your fict is very good, continue please? :3
I really like your fict.. I'm waiting for the next chapter! :-D
Good luck, senpai! ^^ |
 Phillip William-Wammy 2008-10-09 . chapter 3Wow!! Byakuya!! Nice chapter! I like it! ^__^ |
 Phillip William-Wammy 2008-10-09 . chapter 2I smiled when Orihime said 'I will never be able to beat her' ^.^ good fict |
 Phillip William-Wammy 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Nice start :-D |
 xRukiaxx 2008-10-09 . chapter 4Continue! Stories where the main character is talking is pretty rare to find. I also think that it has so little reviews is because people are too lazy to review(like me sometimes) lol
xRukiaxx |
 Zerolr 2008-10-09 . chapter 4Don't put yourself down, this is a good story! |
 Fathom-x 2008-10-09 . chapter 4Since I'm having trouble getting most of those lazy readers to review on my stories myself... I thought I'd comment on your story.
I'm still unsure whether I like the story or not, however, I like the concept.
Part of the reason I waffle on this story is because it is extremely slow paced, and you haven't written much since releasing this story in June. So it makes it difficult to remember what your story is about in the first place and if you have an end in sight any time soon.
This chapter was good and I like how all the characters are protrayed, but a chapter based solely on dialogue with little introspection or conscious throught streams that consists of more than one sentence is a little hard to get involved in.
Anyways, I hope that helps.
Fathom |
 Luhlia 2008-10-09 . chapter 4don't worry, your story is good though it looks like there's something missing. i think...? |
 cattenlent 2008-07-06 . chapter 2 good story:D i like it.when will the flasbacks end? and what rukia is doing right now?why they are seperated because i think it is obvius that rukia likes ichigo.and there will be a happy ending right??!please please end it happy and i will give yoe so many stars that you will be drown in stardust :D. whatever nice work |
 Chi 2008-07-05 . chapter 2 Nice beginning! Update soon :D |
 Neko42 2008-06-14 . chapter 1I like it i like it. updates~! |
 XcaliberSA 2008-06-13 . chapter 1Nice start |