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insanechildfanfic
2009-06-26 . chapter 9
awesome, I love Leon
Hellfire000
2009-04-07 . chapter 7
Love the story and plot, can't wait for an update.
Mizuki hikari
2009-04-07 . chapter 7
lol that was hilarious
CrisscrossAnime
2009-03-22 . chapter 7
Really...intriguing. o.o I've only read the first...2 chapters for PSOH (And didn't really like it..) But so-far, I really like the direction your story is going. So keep up the good work! ^^

The KKM part of the story is canon...right?

Hope to see you update soon!
Akenhod
2009-03-18 . chapter 7
Great all the explanations about Leon and the twins relationship. Just a question, I think I remember that Leon knew that his mother was a mazoku, but now he acts as he doesn't know why he has his powers. That means that he doesn't know what implied to be a mazoku?
In other hand, very funny the end, jeje, Jill should be stunned, jeje.
And that's all.
I hope you will be completely recovered soon.
Cheers!
ChakraSwirls
2009-03-12 . chapter 6
I like this idea. The KKM/PoH thing that is. Your story has great descriptions for the most part, though the mixed tenses make it quite painful to read... but I suppose you've raised my level of patience with this story lol. I've learned to naturally replace words with the correct tenses to read this... so thanks for the new skill. :P I look forward to the next chapter, and hope you are feeling better! :)
geetac
2009-01-29 . chapter 6
This is a good chapter I read.
Akenhod
2009-01-29 . chapter 6
Thank's a lot for the little part about Chèrie, it explained clearly what had happened, but not how had happened, so it solve questions but let others open, maintaining the mistery.
So, Chris is a half-mazoku with powers, and a wind wielder like his mother, good point.
Now the question is... if Chèrie not remembers them, they should travel to Shin Makoku in their own to find her, so... How would them do it? I'm sure that the little visit they have received had some to say about it, jeje. See you!
Cade Mistral
2009-01-28 . chapter 6
Great fic! I absolutely love it!

Hope you get better soon and update quickly, I can't wait for the next chapter.
DaughterofDeath
2009-01-19 . chapter 5
add a new chapter
Akenhod
2009-01-13 . chapter 5
I normally don't like crossovers, but when I saw the two series you choosed I couldn't help to take a look on it because of the surprise. It's a extrange mixture, but it works. One even can say that you have found a reason to the high perception that sometimes Leon had show about Count D magic.
In conclusion, I like the fic, if only you can make the chapters a little longer... :)
A doubt: I suppose that this is happening before Yuuri knows how to travel within words in his own, isn't it? Because, if not, I don't understand why Lady Chèry haven't make any move to contact with them, at least a message send with Yuuri's help or something similar.
I hope you'll be full recovered soon. Cheers!
aida135
2009-01-12 . chapter 5
Get well soon.
Mallix
2008-09-09 . chapter 3
Please update please! Its was getting god!! :P
DaughterofDeath
2008-09-02 . chapter 3
add a new chapter
Mizuki hikari
2008-09-01 . chapter 3
interesting chapter
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