Mercury Gray
2008-06-13
ch 1,  | abuseYes, Peter's sword was called Rhindon. (I wrote an entire story on why.) I really like how you called Susan's horn Aslan's roar; In the movie the mouth of the horn is shaped like a lion's open mouth, so that's a really poetic description not only because it describes the physical object but also because it gives you some idea of its purpose, to summon help to put to rout the foes of Aslan just like the real roar does. This is very, very prettily written; well done! |
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