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| 2Padfoot00Moony8 2008-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseWow. That was really good! |
| harryhermionerw 2008-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was amazingly well-written. I loved it. =) And the last line was absolutely amazing. Awesome job. =) |
| Sweetheart in the corner 2008-08-07 ch 1, | abusei like this = ) |
| msllamalover 2008-08-02 ch 1, | abuseA very nice read, I love how Ron didn't appreciate his brothers, but wished he had done. Worked very well! |
| Strawberry xx 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was utterly. Brilliant. I loved it! :D The longing for Fred, and I always somehow knew Ron felt overshadowed for being the last Weasley brother. You did this PERFECTLY. ^^ Strawberry ^^ |
| bmdohmen 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuse...you made me cry...great story. |
| Gaby Black 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked the Weasley brothers' characterizations. Good job! - Gaby |
| Mary-ann3112 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, made me cry a little ='[ |
| Wotcher-Tonks 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseso sad! well written! |
| I.am.so.sick. 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was simply amazing! I loved the way you portraited each of every single Weasley sibling so amazingly! It was absolutely perfect! I was on the edge of my seat while reading the one-shot; the way Ron's feelings were exposed was incredibly real, almost as if JK had wrote it herself. ^^ Congratulations! You made my day Best Regards, Rita |
| Eusebius 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like that last line, it wraps up the fic nicely. |
| hondagirl 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is really, really nice Elle. I like how you went between Ron and hating all his brothers (well sort of) to dealing with his feelings after the war. And this line just about killed me, "Ron Weasley always wishes Fred were there because then… he’d have five brothers again." That summed everything up perfectly. Great job here. -honda |
| Bad Mum 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThat is beautifully done, Elle. I like the different characteristics Ron picks up for his brothers - especially how you've separated the twins, and made that believable. The end, of course, is SO sad... |
| Kore-of-Myth 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat job Elle! I enjoyed this very much. Just a side note - in your A/N at the bottom, you say 'HPFF' instead of 'HPFC'. Keep Writing! |
| JenniferJ89 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseElle are you determined to make me cry? A wonderful, heartfelt story. I really enjoyed it even if it did make me sad. I loved the phrasing and the bit about the twins especially. Jenny. |