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| Francisca 2008-09-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseAwesome. I'm loving this fic!... I hope that you upload a new chapter soon :P ¡Por favor! Saludos :) |
| Professor Know-it-all 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abuseI totally love hoe you mentioned Sweeney Todd. Very nice touch. Loved this chapter as well. |
| Professor Know-it-all 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI love your characterizations of Sands and El. Mostly Sands though. Very nice. |
| damsel-in-stress 2008-07-15 ch 2, | abuseWow! Loving this fic..please update! I love their conversations ..hehe.. Pure Gold! |
| damsel-in-stress 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abuseWow can't wait till next chapter..hehe... |
| x3jdDOrk 2008-07-12 ch 2, | abuseThis is the first OUATIM fan fiction I've read... slash or not. Point is, it's good. You're writing's really easy to read (I'm easily confused xD), and it's a good story. So far. Hah. Can't wait for more. |
| yoyo-anarchy 2008-06-24 ch 2, | abuseAhh I love this. I love your Sands! The "honey I'm home" thing especially hehe. |
| sandsneweyes 2008-06-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseI was very glad that you update! luv this story. |
| Procrastinatebyreading 2008-06-22 ch 2, | abusei can't tell you how excited i was to see you had updated!! Loved this chapter!!My favorite line was: "El liked to whistle softly. Sands said a whistle made a great shape for the barrel of a gun to sit neatly in." I actually laughed out loud from that. I am really curious to see how you have El find out about Sands' blindness. Some stories have him finding out right away, but i like how you are doing this better because it shows how reluctant Sands is to show any weakness at all. So basically keep up the good work and hopefully i will be reading another chapter soon (really, really soonthat is!!)buh bye!! |
| Procrastinatebyreading 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abusethis is awesome..i have been waiting so long for someone to write a new OUATIM fic. I am lovin' the sands and el interaction...you have the characters down well...i cannot wait for the next chapter!! So...i was just wondering...when do you think you will post the next one?? When something is good, i want to just keep reading, you know? Please tell me soon! Later Dude |
| yoyo-anarchy 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh oh oh, I love this. Would definitely love to see more! You've just nailed their characters. |
| sandsneweyes 2008-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abusethat´s awesome! Hope you continue soon! |
| st 2008-06-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseso far so good |
| cobalt elysium 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuse**. This is great! Sounds pretty promising and finally, a long fic on OUATiM- and its Sands/El too!! XD You've got Sands down pretty well too. Great job and yea. Btw, Stockholm Syndrome, fan of muse? It's an awesome song anyway. |