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kittyperry
2009-11-05 . chapter 12
I love this story - it is so different.
snakegirl-sprockett
2009-04-29 . chapter 12
Wow this is a really interesting theme!!

I love your take on a witches first pregnancy!! oh!

looking forward to the next chapter!
blue artemis
2009-03-26 . chapter 12
Your take on Hermione and Severus is quite interesting.
Megan Consoer
2009-02-05 . chapter 12
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
MollysSister
2009-01-07 . chapter 12
Its been so long I cannot remember why Hermione's child will be Lily?

This change that Hermione has ungone is truely frightening. Its like she is in a trance or meditative state. I wonder can she comprehend all that Severus is telling her? Its rather spooky!

I look forward to the next update.
Heather the Writer
2009-01-04 . chapter 12
What an interesting story! This has certainly never been done before. Very much enjoyed.
sunsethill
2008-12-16 . chapter 12
It's wonderful to see an update on this story. The mystery of the old magic remains, but now we have more of a feel for what we are looking for. And it still creeps me out to think of Voldie stealing Harry's body and using it for evil and to create more horcruxes. Thoroughly nasty.
notwritten
2008-12-15 . chapter 12
It was very interesting. Keep smiling. :-)
MrsHermioneSeverusSnape
2008-12-15 . chapter 12
update soon please
fairlyironic
2008-12-15 . chapter 12
Yeah, we finally find out Severus' motivations. For the record, this plot is very clever. Also, I hope that Severus actually survives to raise his daughter himself :)
Justa Human
2008-12-15 . chapter 12
This is creepy good and well written, please continue soon.
Heidi191976
2008-12-15 . chapter 12
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
Lady Hamlet
2008-12-15 . chapter 12
Hm, I wonder what Hermione will do now? I can't wait to find out what happens next!
HinataMorningstar
2008-12-15 . chapter 12
wow. that was a long wait.
Coragyps
2008-11-20 . chapter 11
hm, this is very creepy. I hope you'll add another chapter (or twelve)!
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