That was really good but kouga's eyes are green.

Your story is so cool!
Please make more of this fics. I would love it, if you could make a tokyo mew mew with ichigo and kisshu too. Just suggesting. Love it. Keep going.
See ya
Ja ne

Great story! Would love to see more!!

yay yay thank you so much I love this couple

this was a really cute O/S. i liked it a lot. though i think you should go back and clean it up a bit...grammar, puntuation, spelling...
nice job over all!