 juri 2009-11-09 . chapter 1 This is the funniest and most amusing Death Note fic I've read. The voice you give L in this is hilarious! I was expecting a twist at the end, but you just leave it and me wanting more. :D |
 genderless-but straight 2009-10-25 . chapter 1you're gonna write more right? |
 Sakura Katana 2009-10-11 . chapter 1That was so good!
"I just wanted to say that you're a fun babysitter" aww ^^ |
 nuitobscurcie 2009-07-21 . chapter 1brilliant. absolute genius.
what more can i say? |
 Merynn and Speedy Hobbit 2009-07-15 . chapter 1*sniggles* This is way, way too funny =o) Little Light! Too cute. XD Wait until a teacher gets on his bad side... mweheeheehee
~Speedy |
 Ravens Bane 2009-07-09 . chapter 1*Cracks up*
Entirely believable! I can really see Light attempting to drug L XD
(Something I would do in a heartbeat to L X3)
Loved this! |
 GaarasEmoX3 2009-07-04 . chapter 1Oh, I like this. Please write more along these lines? *seven-year old Light giving you puppy eyes*
Light-"Pleeaase?" |
 Adrienne-sensei 2009-06-18 . chapter 1Aw, I love this. :) 14-year-old L was amazing (and adorable), and I love his crush on Light's mom (LxLight is my OTP, too). I was giggling hysterically throughout most of it -- it was so funny -- and it was perfectly in-character and really realistic too. Good work. :) |
 Dooki 2009-06-05 . chapter 1oh gosh, this was SO Funny. I was in hysterics, the tone was brilliant. so L!!. And the part where he thought that Light's mom would think he was a prostitute...oh dear. XD So awesome! thanks for writing! |
 My Favorite Crooked Smile 2009-05-31 . chapter 1This is so funny! omg, I was laughing so hard my mother asked me what was going on. Thanks for writing this, I can hardly ever find stories about a younger L and Light. |
 Social disorder 2009-05-18 . chapter 1This is probably the most amusing first person death note fanfic I have ever read. The part that got me roaring with laughter had to have been L crushing on Light's mom and thinking he'd not only get some but get PAID for it! I'd love to see Watari's expression after hearing all L had to say about that.
I know this is more then likely an overly abused questions, and since I'm too lazy to scroll through all those other reviews I'll just go on and ask it, do you think you'll ever write a somewhat sequel to this? Just another one shot, preferably one with a slightly older much more legal Light? I just think it would be funny ( and I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one ) if L got an eye full of the pretty teen all grown up.
Well whether you do decide to write a sequel to this or not, is still in my top favorites of awesome death note fan fictions. |
 Mayahyena 2009-05-03 . chapter 1Being honest, this was the first story of yours, plus the first DN fanfic, that I had ever read. It's really what got me interested in Death Note fanfic. Everything is so humorous and biting. I love the characterization. It fits perfectly with the characters if they had been this age while meeting.
heh. Had L been reviewing his old tapes regarding Japan during the Kira case and run across this? Is that why he suspected Light from the beginning? Whatever the case, brilliant job writing this. I'm amazed by your ability to be very angsty in one fic, super light-hearted in another, and still be able to keep the characters IC. I admire your abilities! |
 NX-Loveless-XN 2009-04-26 . chapter 1TOO CUTE AND FUNNY!! You just have to finish this dear! |
 PynkPlayar 2009-03-22 . chapter 1Very entertaining! You are really skilled at accurate characterization. I love the way L dialects into his little recorder. I wouldn't have ever thought Light to be such a devil child --what happened to the well-behaved son everyone thought him to be? I guess the absence of parents unleashes his bad side? Really liked Sayu --so cute! But in real life, I'd probably think they were brats, hate their guts, and have to refrain myself from strangling them. Good thing L is pretty mild-tempered. Also loved how L thought he was such a chick-magnet. x3
Yay! Have a gold star --> * (or a black star. same difference)
Now I'm going to go look for cookies myself...
Keep writing!! |
 waftimah 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Ah I love this story! L's recordings are hilarious, and so are Light's evil plans at seven. Thanks for a great fic! |