WOW... Just wow. I jsut can't say how good this is.

I think it would have been better if you had continude it.

Personally it was good but why does Amy always has to be the dumb one? As in the one who gets all of the shots?!?! Come on you have to make a second chapter. Please!

OMGG...this was totally amazing!! :D :D :D I mean, the descriptions were awesome, and the evil that surrounded her...it gave me shivers! So, shadow was a demon and he was taking her in for the kill? Or maybe she was just drunk? Ooh, totally amazing story though. You are really talented :) Nice to find an original story. You switched between tenses once, but other than that, it was good. :)

Creepy! Gawd, that freaked me out! Great descriptive words and emotion as always! ^__^ *faves* Brilliant! Keep it up!

~When darkness falls, heroes will rise~
~Swift~

woah, um did he kill her? that was sumthin! i really did not understand the end though!

haha it was pretty cool! :)

I loved it.

Wow u made a new story. About time! =)
Is this a one shot or a story. Kinda hard to tell.

Wow, this was amazing.

...Wow...Luv it!Gr8 story keep it up!!

You mentioned 2 of the greatest bands eva! great one-shot. can't wait until your next story update.

Wow, what a dark story! It flowed so beautifully and I really got lost in it, and the ending made the whole thing seem like a dream with the deep emotions Amy felt and the description you put in there. You are very skilled in writing!

Talk about a bait-and-switch! This one is AWESOME! Seriously, I hope you do more in this style

that was interesing is ther another story you part 2 i hope so i what to know what happen to amy

Eep! *hides under blanket and whimpers*
That...was amazingly written...and very scary. The description at the beginning is fantastic and as the story progressed I found myself hugging my knees closer and closer. I'm such a whimp XD
So Shadow was a demon the whole time? Or did he spike the drink in the beginning? Hmm...maybe I'm thinking too hard about this, hehe. I'm glad to see that you're not having a writers block any more and I hope that it stays that way, cuz they're no fun ;p
Awesome job Prosha-senpai!