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Reviews for: The Fleeting Sand
Carryon14 2/26/11 . chapter 1
I loved that there was a whole story, that all these snapshots fit together! And so very, very passionate ;) Obi-wan a passionate man? that is an encouraging thought. But what will Sabe do, alone in Tatooine, after he is gone? Who is the "departed sister"?
cutemara 1/18/11 . chapter 6
Re-read it and it's still lovely even now!
Asgardian-candy 5/31/09 . chapter 1
Aw, that was sweet and sad all at the same time. Very good job.
Money Honey 4/15/09 . chapter 1
Despite the limitation of constructing a story with just one sentence under different themes, it works very well and the story is complete.

All of them are lovely, but "Chocolate" is my favorite.

"Sex" comes to a close second. That's so like Obi-wan to not make a sound while making love, haha.
cutemara 12/15/08 . chapter 1
That was lovely! Thank you for sharing!
Cariel 6/14/08 . chapter 1
I really hope one of their children survived, if only to keep Sabé company after Obi-Wan has to leave with Luke. This is so sad in parts and so beautiful. I think you really captured Sobiwan perfectly!
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