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Reviews for: The Fleeting Sand Beckons
SavagelyDisTurbed
2009-05-31 . chapter 1
Aw, that was sweet and sad all at the same time. Very good job.
Money Honey
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Despite the limitation of constructing a story with just one sentence under different themes, it works very well and the story is complete.

All of them are lovely, but "Chocolate" is my favorite.

"Sex" comes to a close second. That's so like Obi-wan to not make a sound while making love, haha.
cutemara
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
That was lovely! Thank you for sharing!
Cariel
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
I really hope one of their children survived, if only to keep Sabé company after Obi-Wan has to leave with Luke. This is so sad in parts and so beautiful. I think you really captured Sobiwan perfectly!
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