This fanfic was awesome!! I can't wait to read the third installment of the trilogy!!

I think you should have been the head writer for Passions... You came up with better storylines than Reilly could have ever hoped to have come up with!! Storylines like this would kept the show going, no doubt about it!!

This story is awesome!! I loved The Ex Factor, and I love Whisper as well!! I wish they had done something like this with the storyline on the show!! This is great, it's awesome!!

I really enjoyed both, "The Ex Factor" and "Whisper".
When I used to watch the show, there were plenty of times that I wished I had the ability to jump through the screen to slap some sense into all three parties of Theresa, Ethan and Gwen.
The fact that you re-wrote Sarah as alive came as a shock. When foul play was mentioned regarding her autopsy, Alistair was the first thought that came to my mind; that he was the one behind it and still alive, much to everyone's dismay, inflicting havoc on those around him.
In real life, not so much a soap opera, it'd make sense that they'd put aside their pettiness to find Sarah. It is my belief that when children come in the picture, all other things pale in comparison to the well being of the child, which is what should take precedence. But, I liked that you made the girls grow up into women and finally start acting like it, ABOUT TIME.
When Sarah wanted to call Theresa, her other mommy, and she came back with the reply of a bedpan flying at her head, had me cracking up. Afterward, the banter with Theresa, Gwen and Chad at the office, absolutely hysterical.
Fancy and Ethan's reaction to the new formed friendship was hilarious, when they both realized that only Gwen knew the source behind Theresa's nightmares. Theresa and Gwen's friendship seemed forced at first, and it took a little bit for me, personally to warm up to the idea of that actually happening but I LOVED how you played out the ending of Whisper.
In the chapters leading up to Chris' arrest, my thoughts were that both Jared and Chris were cohorts planning some horrible thing for the residents of Harmony, definitely didn't expect Jared to be an undercover FBI agent. I never did think for a moment that Jared had staying power, Theresa and Ethan all the way.
Anyway, enough of my book.
Kudos.
I look forward to the last part of your trilogy.

I'm hooked on your stories... I hope you continue to write more I'll definately be reading... off to start Matchmakers :D

i love your stories. they are awsome. you write really well i cant wait for the new one to come out! i dont want you to stop at matchmakers haha.

WOW... I had so many chapters to catch up on but it was SO worth it! The end of this story was so captivating I'm glad I got to read it all at once or I would have gone crazy waiting!
Firstly, I loved Ethan picking up Theresa and carrying her out of her wedding to Jared. It was such a perfect image of the two of them and one is of the highlights of all the chapters I got to read.
I loved all the moments at the cabin and I LOVE how you included "Kiss Me". When those scenes first aired I remember how much I loved them and having the song play a part in the story was amazing.
I know I am writing so much but I can't help myself! I love the ending with Gwen driving Theresa to find Ethan. I think it was great that Gwen finally told Theresa she had been helping Ethan all along and I really liked that Gwen finally got to feel at peace with herself knowing she helped Ethan and Theresa be together. It was good to see her guilt being resolved!
The ending was perfection! Theresa finding Ethan and both of them having the moment to say "Okay, we're going to do this" made me tear up a little! The epilogue was also awesome and although I wish Ivy would get over her anger towards Theresa I think her need for revenge will be an interesting aspect in your next story.
I'm sorry for the long review but I just had to let you know how much I loved reading this story. You are an amazing writer and I enjoyed every word! I can't wait to read "The Matchmakers!"

I love this story. I have actually just read both in the last week. You are an awesome writer! I can not wait to read the 3rd one.

hi, ive been following your stories and they have to be my fave out of all passions stories. They are so suspenseful. i cant wait until you update. i check everyday on my fone until you do :) so hurry! lol

heather

Wow!That was great. I hope Ethan can just learn to move on, but then again i do hope he doesn't give up...Hurry and update soon...

WOW... another completely amazing update! I love this story and am totally hooked.
The highlight for me was totally the Theresa-Gwen scene. I love that Gwen said they would go down together if anything ever came out about what happened in Jesenik. The dynamic that you've written between the two women is so interesting that I love the way they interact. The "We're not hugging, Theresa" line had to be my favorite! I can't wait to see the two of them "bond" more.
ALSO, the return of Dr. Love! Ek! I'm sorry, but I love that aspect of this story. He's such a smartass and makes me laugh everytime!
Excellent update and I can't wait for more. The wedding is bound to be very interesting!

WOW! He won't keep that promise. He can't. He loves her, more than anything, right? Hurry and update soon...

Wow, that last chapter made me cry. I can't believe that Theresa would stay with Jared! Why Theresa why?!? Ethan broke my heart though. He better not give up on her!
Amazing chapters, I read all four at once and they were all incredible. I SO didn't see that Jared being an FBI agent coming, that was a huge suprise to me. Even though he was doing something good- I still don't like him! :) Hahaha
Great update, can't wait for more!

WOW! That was really good. I didn't expect that Jared was FBI. I thought he was a mean, scheming guy. But nice twist. Hurry and update soon.

Gee, someone could write a story that not only entails happiness for Gwen, and a reunion for Ethan and Theresa as well! Ava is a talented writer who doesn't have to resort to playing out private and nasty "stimulation" fantasies making one in untold agony while the other has their happily ever after. Her stories aren't one-note tripe and have many facets and manage to appeal to more than one fanbase.

Amazing update!
Firstly, I have to say I absolutely LOVED that you brought back the cab driver from Jesenik. So funny! I also loved Gwen and Ethan being so devious to make sure Jared didn't show up to the dance competition. I've said it before but I'll say it again-- I love the two of them working together!
As for the dance Ethan and Theresa performed... all I can say is I loved every minute of it. I really liked that Theresa was conflicted about dancing with Ethan but kept her cool and got through it. And they won! :) Yay!
I'm rambling again but I just wanted to say great job. I can't wait to see what Jared has up his sleeve and I'm hoping for some more Dr. Love! Hahaha